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that was good keep the chapters coming

Really looking forward to reading more

I like their independence. Makes sense.

Any excuse to keep Hana in is worth me reading

Anti chakra! This sounds fun.

holy shit this seems really interesting! i haven't read a lot of fics with the shinigami playing a bigger part and ohh it's such a shame because gods and mythology and all that stuff is so cool! i'll definitely be keeping an eye on this~

out of the 776 stories i am following at the moment, you are the only one to update today. thank you!

and should not his death chakra have his own element because so far the theme of shinigami chakra on him just like a useless ornament in your fic

Alright, so far ... this is a very nice story.
Yeah, the basics are great, good structure, stable pacing, very nice flowing narrative, overall nice style, some good attention to detail. All of that help to create a solid picture and portrayal a universe that is interesting and immersive.
There is originality here, the whole shinigami chakra as anti-charka (so to speak) is a nice idea and for the most part it actually makes sense. The motive of balance is a very nice touch and yeah, I sort of understand the idea behind the new chakra type. I mean regular chakra is physical energy mixed with spiritual energy. I guess we can assume that spiritual component is present in both variants, but I doubt the physical aspect is applicable to the god of death. Yes, everything is still a bit vague and not entirely explained, but ... that is quite fine, it is a mystery and a concept that must be explored within the story. Even for Hiruzen this all is more of a enigma, the characters themselves don't know what they are dealing with exactly and again, that is quite alright. I honestly like that this story will allow me to explore something new and see how it works, how it mixes with everything else and how it will be developed. There are many opportunities and possibilities.
Characters are ... well, more or less well defined and developed, at least as far as three chapters allow. They have distinctive personalities (though hardly as colourful as canon, but that is a matter of style). Dialogue is good, interactions work fine, so yeah, good.
Actions scenes are ... well, easily above average. I mean there was basically only bell test actions, so I can't expect a reply gripping actions scene, but for what it was, it was overall decent. Some strategy, some unexpected moves, yeah nice. Could use a bit more speed, ninja combat is generally fast paced and more ... clever, so to speak. It is best when the whole actions sequence has elements that work with one another forming a single patterns with some parts influencing others. In other words when something that happens at the start actually plays a role in the end or something. Your actions scene can really be simply cut to pieces with every bit working as an independent sequence tied together only with characters and plot, but not the action itself. I am really getting very deep into it, this is not even a fault, just ... a comment or a suggestion. But considering the overall high quality of this story so far, I think it was worth mentioning (in most other cases I would not bother with this even).
Hana is made younger ... err, not a fan of age changing, but ... nothing crippling. If that works, so be it. My personal taste is just that and I honestly don't have that much trouble with this. Actually, this could even be for the best, allowing us to have some nice portrayal of Hana as a character. In canon she had very little time dedicated to her, so I see no trouble. As for Shino ... nothing to complain about really.
So overall, I liked it. This clearly has much though and planning put into this with quite a bit of actual effort. What not to like.

Naruto should have life Chakra it balancing out three energies .Uzimaki Chakra symbolizing life ,Kuubi Rebirth and Last Shimigami Symbolizing fueling regeneration of Naruto Cells and rebirth of those cells .Naruto Life Force and Chakra symboling Life sustaining him and Final death Power With Kyuubi and own chakra balance Shimigami .So Naruto like Make never to deplete his own Chakra do being need to counter death Chakra ,Same Kyuubi chakra need to regenerate and Farther balancing Should naruto be complete Cut off from Kyuubi Chakra he run risk of Death do being third part key balance power within.
In Way Paper if Naruto Channeling Death Chakra then like result in Paper Crumbling to Dust .

Like true Curse naruto need Very careful like kill him self ,even things around him .Learning to control such deadly power good drive for naruto .Hell maybe even have accidentally kill something or someone would add more character to him .Possible if use to much part body starts to and take while Kyuubi chakra to repair the damage .
ability :
Soul Fire:
Blackish Fire that Burns life force Living only Body behind or burns Cold .
Death Mist:
Mist that Eats away flesh .
Rot Water:
water Cause body start to decay and Rot .
Withering Shadow :
Shadow that drain life leaving wither Husk of Victim
Age Winds:
Chilled Wind that one hits cause that hit to age
Presence of Death:
Chilling presence that scare even bravest animals and Add with killing Intent it can Cause Weak Will to flee ,Panic ,Maybe Even Die and possible other such effects .

whoa! what a great start. I can't wait for more. thanks for sharing.