Neat more stuff with Qrow and the sisters

The summary made me think it was a new Imagine Dragons song

Does Atlas still have those cybernetic prosthetics? Or are they too valuable to give up cuz Ruby could use a prosthetic right now.

Hey, your old pall Namah here! I loved that last chapter. All in all I can't offer any criticism that doesnt feel like nitpicking so im just gonna try to reassure you about the action which was not excessive in my opinion, it respects the threat that the nukelavee present that the battle was so hard won. Then end felt good a swell though its open endedness might rub some poeple the wrong way.

parting thoughts: I hope We see Ruby back in action hopefully not as suicidal, Robot arm?! Jaune really sort of carried her on this one he oughta be easier on himself I hope to see them again maybe as THE BEST HUNTSMAN COUPLE REMNANT'S EVER SEEN!

are going do lancaster ? beacause this fic feels like lancaster

At this point its hard to say much, but your writing ability is already far beyond most of the writers on the site, so good job.

Nice chapter!

Another good chapter. Ruby does strike me as the type to be unbelieably moved by Jaune's act of heroism. So don't worry It doesn't come out as unnatural or preachy at all. Sure is isnt one two one what you would hear real life but then again should it be? I really enjoyed the end too. you stepped the literary techniques up a notch there. I should start doing more of that too.

wow, I know I'm throwing a lot of hate here at jaune (which is strange in me but what little he has done in this fic angered me) ... but seriously I hope that now he wakes up from a damn time and is help a little.
It has a basic use with its semblance on its side and now ruby has a basic understanding of the enemy's abilities.
Their chances are still very bad but with ruby's ability and hopefully some Jaune plan, they may achieve their goal.
Maybe...

Only a little?

I like the character of Jaune but here I sincerely hate him, leaving aside that it was with ruby to be dead weight apparently since he refuses to give the little use he could offer, it is the typical case of a person who is so focused in his own pain he does not realize that there are easily a thousand people who are much worse but who, unlike him, do something about it.

Another solid chapter, it's a shame you couldn't complete it in slotted number of chapter but hey, more for us amairite fellas? Haha I jest. looking forward to next step. clearly Jaune is gonna unlock his healing semblance next. I got to be honest when it was revealed in the show I wasnt particularly happy with it I was more angry at concept of him healing rather than at the lack luster delivery to. I think you can make it work though.

I like the fight with the Nuckelavee and the end of the chapter. Good job, I can't wait to read the next!

I fear you may have left yourself too much ground to cover. You said this was a three parter. That means that in the next chapter. Jaune and Ruby have to kill the nuckelavee, Get over the death of Pyrrha, forgive each other and only then they get together. And do all this while Ruby is freaking out and Jaune is being the weaklink wallowing in self pity. It feels like you have a lot to do to close this story out and I would not be suprised if need to split the last chapter into two.

Awesome chapter! How many story arcs would this fic have?

Nice chapter!