plz update !

plz update!

I would very much enjoy some more of this. They're kinda cute togther.

Madara protects your happiness, even though this has confronted Prince Rhaega; use your sharingan to see the consequences of the decisions you want to make. That if he tries to take Lyanna, he will only bring the end of his family because this would cause the war.

Tienes razon lyanna fue una niña mimada que jodio a su familia por un capricho quien se casa con alquien por que te da una corona de flores con un hombre que solo la queria como criadero de bebes y que estaba igual de loco que aerys es decir proteges con tu guardia real a tu puta pero no a tu esposa e hijos demencial y lyanna por mucha estark y sangre de loba y termino como toda dama de westeros cojida y con un niño no se compara a arya

Todos en Westeros estan muertos solo que no lo saben nadie es mas manipulator que madara manipulo a obito que manipulo a nagato y plane su muerte y resucitacion

Ok I apologize for the review or reviews?
I dont remember doing a another copy of my recent review on this story?
Hmmmm must be a glitch on fanfiction.
But again I apologize for that unknown copy if it is annoying you and i apologize if it's a flame in your eyes which it is not.
Good luck on the next chapter and hope it comes soon.

Ok please for the love of God if lyanna nearly gets caught have madara really tear into her despite being in love with her.
Because that dumb girl doesnt even fucking realize how things are fucking tense around the mad king aerys where if you something like say be a mysterious knight then you are just asking for a death wish because aerys will literally kill anyone or anything that is challenging his rule or is an assassin.
And if she runs off with rhaegar then that means only one thing. Both HER and rhaegar are responsible for the deaths of thousands of men,women, and children.
Mostly of men who died fighting in the rebellion that those 2 idiots started and also families getting caught on the crossfire.

Hell suggestion.
Can you please do a song of ice and fire or game of thrones where lyanna and rhaegar get an honest to God ass ripping from anyone who is realistically pissed off at the two idiots because their 'love' costed the lives of thousands men,women, and children which means.
Families lost their fathers, elder sons, or elder brothers or just any Male relation that is fit enough to fight in a war to families that were killed in the crossfire or at the end like the sack of kings landing where Lannister forces raped, and pillaged the people of kings landing.
Have those 2 be brought up on trial on their actions as even ned will be against lyanna because like it or not she got her father and brother killed and again thousands of others.
If the truth came out and she even survived the rebellion then you can bet your ass that lyanna will be facing an angry mob of people who will be demanding justice.

So good luck on the next chapter and hope it comes soon.
And I apologize if this review may sound like a flame a little it's not. It's just two people getting punished for their negligence on not thinking with their heads which had a very bloody consequence.

Ok please for the love of God if lyanna nearly gets caught have madara really tear into her despite being in love with her.
Because that dumb girl doesnt even fucking realize how things are fucking tense around the mad king aerys where if you something like say be a mysterious knight then you are just asking for a death wish because aerys will literally kill anyone or anything that is challenging his rule or is an assassin.
And if she runs off with rhaegar then that means only one thing. Both HER and rhaegar are responsible for the deaths of thousands of men,women, and children.
Mostly of men who died fighting in the rebellion that those 2 idiots started and also families getting caught on the crossfire.

Hell suggestion.
Can you please do a song of ice and fire or game of thrones where lyanna and rhaegar get an honest to God ass ripping from anyone who is realistically pissed off at the two idiots because their 'love' costed the lives of thousands men,women, and children which means.
Families lost their fathers, elder sons, or elder brothers or just any Male relation that is fit enough to fight in a war to families that were killed in the crossfire or at the end like the sack of kings landing where Lannister forces raped, and pillaged the people of kings landing.
Have those 2 be brought up on trial on their actions as even ned will be against lyanna because like it or not she got her father and brother killed and again thousands of others.
If the truth came out and she even survived the rebellion then you can bet your ass that lyanna will be facing an angry mob of people who will be demanding justice.

So good luck on the next chapter and hope it comes soon.
And I apologize if this review may sound like a flame a little it's not. It's just two people getting punished for their negligence on not thinking with their heads which had a very bloody consequence.

Lyanna need to learn some discipline right now huh?, she getting a bi head for that training she need to learn some failure and humility

So...No Robert anymore.
Looks like Robert won't be angry (or as angry) if the prince kidnaps Lyanna this time.
On the other hand...a certain one-man-army of a demi-god will.
Even 3 full size dragons wouldn't be able to save the mad king and his kin from the godlike super ninjas wrath.

It will be interesting to see whether Robert will join the rebellion or his king though this time.
The Baratheons are cousins to the Targaryens...it was only Lyanna which made him rebel last time.
Then again...mad Aerys wanted his head too...So..." off with the mad kings head the proud lord said"

Either way...I can't see Madara bending the knee to Robert, or anybody else for that matter...besides maybe Lyanna abd then only if he decides to propose to her (and even then I'm not certain)
Either Madara becomes the new king...or he tells Robert to go 'F' himself when everybody else does. Either way...He is way too proud to do it himself...and seriously...who could force him to. Gods bend to no mortal.

If this is during the tourney I would REALLY feel bad for those poor squires, just Madara glaring at them will cause them to go into cardiac arrest on the spot, he will take interest in the Crannogmen due to the fact that their people is the mlst ninjalike people in the whole continent barring Dornish and faceless men

Oh Madara Madara Madara you have already fallen under her spell and there is nothing you can do to change that so stop trying to find an answer to a question you already know the answer to. But anyways keep up the good work and i can't wait for the next chapter update.

make after he get mad king under genjutsu with prince to turn them into good rullers start uchiha family on north (use architecture from elemental nations)bright some technologies to make live small folk better ned marry cat as in canon have children with same names they become apprentices they uncle madara and aunt lyana .is rised shinobi and later they wipe faceless mans when try reccrut they is no wars (genjutsu to manipulate people is usefull insead is upgrade reform and rebuild)and more.

oi qwerypous cant you read, everyone has chakra they just dont know how to use it, in shinobi terms civilians