Reviews for An Unexpected Tale in a Galaxy Far Far Away
The Story's Shadow chapter 19 . 5/9
(So sorry for the late review.)

(Fair points. So just temporarily neutralize it, or just turn it on and off whenever he wishes.)

Wouldn't be able to beat Palpatine on his own? Eh, I'm not sure about that. Given his track record and how he is now, I say he'd have a fair shot. Though granted, underestimating Palpatine's abilities is not what I'm doing. I know he's extremely dangerous, so I get where Peter would rather have help against him.

Damn, I sometimes forget how dangerous and powerful some Star Wars' weapons are.
Rushstar32 chapter 19 . 5/7
First, thank you very much for telling me about the crystals not working, wanted to know if it was true or not. Guess that off he chart.

Someone give Peter a hug, he needs it. Lest Anikin is helping him out. I would be tuckered out too after a adventure like that.

Also, those torpedoes sound amazing! I can't wait to see them in action

What will happen next we shall see ;)

Great Chapter Fury :)!
RyanSquad chapter 19 . 5/7
You have made me wait for so long on making me full of impatience. I suppose you didn't mean to be rude.
Johnsmythe2oo2 chapter 18 . 2/22
update and rge force will be with you
The Story's Shadow chapter 18 . 2/19
A time skip? Hmm...

Why would he want to find a way to neutralize his spidey sense? That seems counterintuitive, one might say.

I imagine Jedi training would be hell, given the depths of which one has to explore themself and what's around them. Though, I'm only guessing.

Despite the time skip, Peter hasn't changed much and somehow that doesn't surprise me. Neither has Anakin, except for the whole purple lightsaber. Kenobi become a Sith? I hope not.
Johnsmythe2oo2 chapter 18 . 2/19
more please. its one of the best crossovers in the fanfiction unverse
Rushstar32 chapter 18 . 2/19
I'm beginning to see that Peter and Anikin have a bit of a brotherhood bond here. That Blue Shadow Virus needs to be irradiated ASAP, before things get bloody. Also, those Crystals may also be the key to get Peter home, or at least prevent what might happen in the future.

That Apparition, I don't think that was one, I'm sure the Dark force were trying to get Peter...NOPE, Not a chance.

Another Great Chapter :)
The Story's Shadow chapter 17 . 2/3
(So sorry it took so long for me to review. The past couple of days have been difficult at work. Yesterday I was in considerable pain by the end of my shift. But I've felt guilty for not reviewing earlier.)

(Perhaps Palpatine did it as he's a considerably powerful Sith and he's been around the Jedi for years, so he knows how to manipulate them without setting them off. Not sure, just saying. But you made a valid point.)

So Peter reveals more of himself. The adult/kid scenario threw the Jedi Order for a loop, to say the least.

The revelations of Dooku and Palpatine shook the group, especially the latter. Seeing as how Peter's knowledge could make things better or worse, it's hard to say what will happen.

(Maybe one of the locations on Earth capable of interstellar travel is probably Wakanda given their technological advancements.)

Curious to see what's next.
grimmouse197 chapter 6 . 1/31
Spelling structure could use some major work
grimmouse197 chapter 4 . 1/31
Hey spell lightsaber not light saber
Rushstar32 chapter 17 . 1/30
So the truth is out...somewhat, i must say they took it better than I expected. {Also, Yoda, never change ;)}
Also, if the timeline is going lapooda on them, does that mean most of the deaths that had taken place in the original timeline have either been shifted or deleted form this new one?

As for the Attack of the Clones, maybe it would be a good idea to add bits and pieces of it in the story, merging it with the next chapter so to speak.

Another great chapter :)
The Story's Shadow chapter 16 . 12/12/2019
(Sorry for the late review.)

(Even at full strength, Peter shouldn't be able to take on the likes of Thor as he's a god with great strength and power even amongst gods.)

Peter needed to be quick with his mind and tongue as two Jedi could likely sense a lie, though it probably helped what he said weren't complete lies. Though they do feel something is off about him even though they have accepted him.

Palpatine/Sidious...that bastard, so much horror caused because of evil...only time will tell if things change for the better, worse, or so little there's not much difference.
Rushstar32 chapter 16 . 12/11/2019
And this is where the Timeline shifts. One little or big change has happened and a new chain reaction will start. Where it will go for Peter, Anakin and the others is a mystery, but I am really looking forward to see what happens next :). Great chapter :)
The Story's Shadow chapter 15 . 12/3/2019
(Sorry for the late review...things have been...difficult...)

(I get what you mean, but Peter is still new to this reality and facing such foes would be difficult for him.)

If I remember the fight scene clearly, Jinn still put up a considerable fight regardless of being tired or not. True, Maul was more physically fit yet Jinn's Force sensitivity was greater and so was his experience.

Since he has the body of a child, his strength should be lessened, though still greater than Maul's. This doesn't exactly discount skill, as Maul isn't sparring here he's aiming to kill. Peter has had some lessons, but to defeat Maul at such time? It's unlikely, but it matters little now.

As for the new story, you know my feelings about certain elements of it.
Rushstar32 chapter 15 . 11/30/2019
Way to go Peter! Take that Darth Maul :)! This was a really epic chapter :)

And I will keep an eye on 'The Unexpected Heroes' story ;)
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