Reviews for Children of the Revolution |
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Anon chapter 1 . 3/25 WanderingMercAsashi, so a reflection of you? You pathetic wretch, stop using the internet because all you are is a toxic, sad case who thrives off of terrorising people. Go and get educated on top of a life. |
Baby Fawn chapter 12 . 12/6/2019 This story is looking good so far. I have never heard of the series that is crossed over with Harry Potter. You really made this real good. I will have to try and find this one don't know if it is a manga or a anywho I am hoping to read more of it |
WanderingMercAsashi chapter 12 . 11/16/2019 Filler crap. |
WanderingMercAsashi chapter 10 . 11/16/2019 Merry, not happy, Christmas. |
WanderingMercAsashi chapter 7 . 11/15/2019 I also saw the Touhou version as well. |
Guest chapter 12 . 9/29/2019 Please update |
Nysk chapter 9 . 9/8/2019 Heh Voldemort, The Horned Snake! |
ElementalMaster16 chapter 12 . 9/8/2019 Interesting chapter! I think this is the first time a brother of Harry is ever even remotely interesting as a character, that i've seen that is. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_) |
WearyCurmudgeon chapter 12 . 9/8/2019 Correction: *I've said it for years," Lily said.* Not wrong perse, but I'd recommend swapping "it" for "that" to add to the impact of Lily's concurrence. It's a bit blah at the moment, whereas it's a potential zinger. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Comments: - Fallout So that means, unless James remarries and has another kid or recants on Harry's expulsion, that the House of Potter is going to end up extinct, as I don't see any way to separate Charlie's soul from Tom's. Not after a merger of over 14 years. It would be too akin to making an actual Horcrux by splitting his soul, for the kid not to end up a homicidal maniac. Not that the current version is any better. *shrugs* - Jostanos By absorbing Diarymort, he's at least 50 plus percent of ickle Tommy-kins. (No clue on the percentage of the original sliver) Although, I suspect that if he absorbed the Diadem, that he might top the 60 percent mark. |
Jostanos chapter 12 . 9/7/2019 *blinks* Oh shards. Oh shards! oh shards! oh shards! oh shards! *repeat x2* *ahem* He's not 'Charles' any more~.. Well.. He's not the 'Charles' that _everybody_ knows and loves at any rate. He is oh so much more than that _Now_! He's at least 2/7th Tom Marvolo Riddle Jr.. The 'More Handsome' version anyway. |
god of all chapter 12 . 9/7/2019 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
James1996 chapter 12 . 9/7/2019 Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future. |
Star chapter 12 . 9/7/2019 After reading the chapters up to this point, I must say James may ant to watch his arse and 'Charles' is in for a very rude surprise |
osterreicher97 chapter 12 . 9/6/2019 Huh, was not expecting that, but it makes sense based on what has been hinted at in past chapters. |
t.laurence7 chapter 12 . 9/6/2019 OFFS. Really? Please tell me Harry kills that Dark Tosser for good and saves his ungrateful brother? I don't doubt that Harry can beat Voldemort... Trying to hold back from completely massacring his brother, though? Yeeeaaaah... Good luck with that. Lmfao. Then again, if he can kill Charle-Mort and then revive him like canon Harry, it could work? Or it might just get rid of Charles instead of Voldemort because he had more of a hold on Charles's body than him? Idk. I'm just gonna go read some more of your stories now. Lmao. Good luck on your fics! |