Check out the fic writer cerric. I feel like he could give you some ideas with your kakarot story

I remember reading this around when it first came out I believe at about chapter 3. I fuck with teh story but idk if you consistent with it Ima keep sticking through but I hope you update more consistently. I hope you change things little to. Could involve tarble and turles into the story anything really that can just make the story more interesting. Kakarot trying to overthrow frieza could make alliances with others and stuff to beat frieza but I doubt he would do it.

why the chapters so short?

This kakarot has beaten insurmountable odds his entire life. Going to earth with a power level of 2 no training from the looks of it and beating the odds of tao,tien,roshi,Grandpa Gohan,Piccolo,etc. Must have been a great amount of close calls prolly had to use oozaru form and zenkais just to survive. This kakarot is likely more driven than even goku was.

I know you dont have a lot of reviews but just keep grinding bro. Consistency beats everything. The story has a very different take on a concept many people have used. First take I've ever seen like this. The writing in the beginning does feel a little bland to me like its telling more than showing. I like how kakarot still has that quality of him of never bending which separate him from people like raditz and nappa because they simply accept things the way they are. Was kind of hoping for a different type of kakarot sort of like a evil luffy since most people do kakarot's character the same way like hes a vegeta just weaker but I still like how this is going

Interesting..

Ah, so Gohan leaned to somewhat control his form? Seems so.

Nice thinking how they beat each other to near death seems plausible they were accidentally considered dead and left behind.

So Gohan stopped because his father yelled at him then? I guess I'm a little confused because of the time jump in the last part there.

This story is a real Gem! The slow pace is no problem...especially if it means you come out each time with such well written updates! :)

...wouldn't the 3 of them get in crap though if they take too long to return to Frieza Force? I mean, I guess they could make some sort of excuse...like there were still aliens left, and they confiscated the pods they had to use hit and run tactics to wear the aliens down until they could recover their pods...maybe something like that? Meanwhile, the 3 of them get to train to their hearts content!

Great chapter! I’m glad to see Radz angry and his fire to get better and stronger! Vegeta and Nappa is going to have an unexpected surprise when he sees them again ;).

Until next time bye!

Ahhh...a perfect opportunity for Team 'Raditz/Kakarot/Gohan' to break out on their own.

...also, I suspect that Vegeta/Nappa do NOT have what Frieza aeanted them to find. Perhaps Kakarot might have more luck?

Good job Radz! I'm so proud of him :). That's the only true way to get stronger after all like Vegeta and Kakarot! I hope that now Vegeta recognizes Radditz at least a little bit since he has more courage and Saiyan bravery. But I doubt it lol.

Till next time bye!

Bravo! A 'rebirth' of Raditz that actually makes sense and is in character! 100% score!

Yeah, I guess NOT using the sleep gas a lot of time to think things over for Raditz. Such a great story!

...little sad the updates are so long in between, but I guess you can't rush perfection.

Cell: Did someone call me?

Great chapter! I was so Tense when they were near Lord Freiza, I was just like, Oh no what's going to happen now :D!? Freitas is as cold and calculating as ever. But I'm with Nappa, it could've been worse lol. Also love that extra wariness on Goku's part since he can sense Strength, unlike the other Saiyans, and he has a much better idea of how strong he is .
Till next time, bye!