Reviews for The Spider and the Fly |
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Guest chapter 5 . 4/23 Upload the epilogue pls |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/18 this is one of the worst story i have ever read. |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/23 I want one story where Harry ruthlessly dominates Zabini... Man I am so angry right now.. |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/15 I really really want to kill you |
Proll chapter 5 . 12/6/2019 I don't like this wimpy Harry. |
Destrange chapter 5 . 11/29/2019 Your fic was impressive ! It is perfectly entitled. Harry has no way to escape from the web of Phaedra. She's completly unpredictable. Not Voldemort's way, not Phenix's way, not the minister way... finally her way :) She balances so well fear and trust, lies and truth. I was mesmerized by her dangerous conversation in the two first chapters and about her possible choices in the last chapter. Harry has a great luck she choose his way. She decided the end of the war. (My apologies for possible mistakes. English is not my first langage) |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/4/2019 Well written. |
Elogost27549 chapter 5 . 10/21/2019 I like both of your other stories and thought this one was terrible. Content of the story aside, ending it with a memory charm made everything Harry went through feel pointless. The content of the story made it seem like you were more interested in writing an OC story than a HP story, which is fine but makes the tags and description of the story very disingenuous. |
DarkkLight chapter 5 . 10/12/2019 I kinda hated it, but I guess thats what you were going for. Yet another harry gets screwed fic, but this time he gets raped. Hurray ! Its always amazing to see an authors true character through their writing. |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/8/2019 best story ever |
FateBurn chapter 5 . 9/21/2019 good story |
Clavyus chapter 5 . 9/17/2019 I liked the story, sexy, original and well-written. But, no question about it. This was rape. Kidnapping, alcohol, manipulation through fear and a complete lack of free, unequivocal consent. |
iCaelum chapter 5 . 9/16/2019 I am really glad you finished this. Your OC character was fucking fantastic. If you ever decide to do an epilogue or after story after he defeats Voldemort that would be awesome. |
James1996 chapter 5 . 9/8/2019 Great story, I look forward to reading the epilogue if you ever post it. |
ffntfy456 chapter 5 . 8/29/2019 That was a great ending. I hope you start another story soon. |