Reviews for The Spider and the Fly
Guest chapter 5 . 4/23
Upload the epilogue pls
Guest chapter 5 . 3/18
this is one of the worst story i have ever read.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/23
I want one story where Harry ruthlessly dominates Zabini... Man I am so angry right now..
Guest chapter 5 . 2/15
I really really want to kill you
Proll chapter 5 . 12/6/2019
I don't like this wimpy Harry.
Destrange chapter 5 . 11/29/2019
Your fic was impressive ! It is perfectly entitled. Harry has no way to escape from the web of Phaedra. She's completly unpredictable. Not Voldemort's way, not Phenix's way, not the minister way... finally her way :)
She balances so well fear and trust, lies and truth. I was mesmerized by her dangerous conversation in the two first chapters and about her possible choices in the last chapter. Harry has a great luck she choose his way. She decided the end of the war.
(My apologies for possible mistakes. English is not my first langage)
Guest chapter 5 . 11/4/2019
Well written.
Elogost27549 chapter 5 . 10/21/2019
I like both of your other stories and thought this one was terrible. Content of the story aside, ending it with a memory charm made everything Harry went through feel pointless. The content of the story made it seem like you were more interested in writing an OC story than a HP story, which is fine but makes the tags and description of the story very disingenuous.
DarkkLight chapter 5 . 10/12/2019
I kinda hated it, but I guess thats what you were going for. Yet another harry gets screwed fic, but this time he gets raped. Hurray ! Its always amazing to see an authors true character through their writing.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/8/2019
best story ever
FateBurn chapter 5 . 9/21/2019
good story
Clavyus chapter 5 . 9/17/2019
I liked the story, sexy, original and well-written. But, no question about it. This was rape. Kidnapping, alcohol, manipulation through fear and a complete lack of free, unequivocal consent.
iCaelum chapter 5 . 9/16/2019
I am really glad you finished this. Your OC character was fucking fantastic. If you ever decide to do an epilogue or after story after he defeats Voldemort that would be awesome.
James1996 chapter 5 . 9/8/2019
Great story, I look forward to reading the epilogue if you ever post it.
ffntfy456 chapter 5 . 8/29/2019
That was a great ending. I hope you start another story soon.
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