Incredible your fiction is Magic . Thank's for your job and story

Oh. My... my heart, Tyki’s heart, Allen’s heart, all in pain. This is so beautiful, so expressive, it draws the reader in and we ache with Allen, hold a hand to our chest as he feels the pain of this unrequited love. Mourn what could have been with Tyki, and wish that regret could be enough to let them be happy together. This is so emotional and draws in the reader in seemingly effortless ways that are no way effortless. You did an amazing job with this.