Reviews for Father Lost
BrightLotusMoon chapter 1 . 12/9/2019
I'm genuinely surprised I've never left a comment here. It's masterful and agonizing and heartbreaking and so perfect.

I think a lot about this headcanon, that Mikey suffered from his own trip, similar to Donnie. Your story pretty much sums it up. I feel the need to see Mikey and Donnie working through their trauma together in little ways.
Supermikeyninjalady chapter 1 . 4/9/2019
This was freaking amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2018
LOVE IT, The writing is so darn the greatest!
greater then the other I read
Also
MY BABY BOY!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2018
FINALLY, YAAAS!
I don’t see it anywhere like this!
Awesome writing!
Love it!
Wanda chapter 1 . 9/12/2018
Oh man! You stabbed me in the feels heavy! i don't remember coming across a description of what Mikey went through that stirring.
all-the-years chapter 1 . 9/12/2018
Aww. Poor Michelangelo. Honestly Donnie’s reality is so traumatic I never thought much about the underlying trauma that Mikey could experience.

Also- nice touch on having spoken Japanese being represented in italicized words. I so appreciate the desire to bring in the language to the story, but the needing to translate can get tedious sometimes to it was nice to have the feel without the work.
Ryo-chan wolfgirl chapter 1 . 9/12/2018
Wow... this was so intense. Beautifully written and on point. I had tears rolling down my face, no joke.

I always figured that Mikey felt guilty for what happened to the Sliver in the Super-Turtles world, but no one’s ever touched on that. Mikey’s always so focused on helping his family overcome their own traumas that he neglects his own until it becomes too much for him to bare anymore. You touched on his fears and pain very accurately. The ending really got me, the feels, the love between all of them was really powerful. I loved it. His family will now help him like they’ve been helping Donnie.

Well done.