Oh, gosh!
Amazing! Even I ended up laughing how good she had gotten him! She really fooled him! Hahah, nice fluff! Good job!

Good shots. My favorites so far are with May, Serena, Mallow and Lana. If I may suggest, I'd like Korrina as a wildcard entry if you don't mind.

It's been a while since I looked into these, and it's great to see the collection growing. Every new story a self-contained fluff story that I almost wish that it goes a bit "deeper" as far as intimacies go. Just a credit to your writing style I suppose. Almost a shame you're in the "final stretch" now but I trust you have something interesting planned before closing this story of one-shots and moving on to other things.

As for this chapter: maybe I haven't seen a lot of Pokemon lately (much less any season after DP due to college and stuff) but I think you got the characters down very well, including Iris.

Iris was a treat here as Ash's approach to her is unorthodox as usual, which fits his character. If Iris can figure out loopholes like using trees to win a race, she'll be a sure-in for Gym Leader. Maybe even champion of Unova like in B2W2.

I'd argue the Officer Jenny part seemed a bit contrived and possibly ruining the moment if not for reminding us that yes, the police are around and kind of help get the two moving on to the next relevant part.

All and all, good piece.
-Vegeta the 3rd

Yeah... Iris was someone I had a tendency to tune out during 5th gen anime. She came off annoyingly abrasive (to me anyway) most of the time trying to act as know it all, yet majority of the time offered very little to the group.

But, I do respect your iteration of her, she is a bit more playful and mature (perhaps due to ageexperience? ) when interacting with Ash. It came off much more organic than it would have in the anime! So once again props to you!

Excellent again, as expected. What I really like about these stories is how Ash maintains his childlike energy and vigor, but also has wisdom and experience that might not necessarily give the girls answers, but shows them how to get thereand that he cares. It works so well

Feel it hasnt been right. Majority of the chapters were Misty, Dawn, May, and Serena.
You seriously could've done more with the Alola crew and Iris. Felt like they were an afterthought... but instead we only got one each! Other than two shot with Cynthia, that's only 6 chapters (5 really)...
What about others? Would be fun seeing Caitlin again, or Sabrina, Daisy (Gary's sister or even Misty), Flannery or Elesa! So many more could do!
Or even Galar region now! Did find one with Bea

I’ve never been a fan of Iris, though that’s honestly because Best Wishes was terrible. But I actually really liked what you did here—Iris and Ash both being independent makes them clash. Also, I’m a stockings fan so that was great lol. And here’s hoping you do a Gisselle/Ash pairing, that’s my one request. Keep up the great work!

Great as usual

Someone’s seen Spider-Man.

Considering you don’t know much about Iris, this was pretty well done.

Niiiiice I was hoping you would include iris. Negaishipping is a guilty pleasure of mine. I’d definitely love to see a chapter with Zoey as the interest at some point.

Reminds me a little of P5 in the form of Ren and Makoto.

Even though it was your first time doing iris in this story u did a fantastic job and it felt like iris was in character not only that but she definitely felt more mature and grown up then when they traveled together for the first time awesome job and yeah to be honest I seen enough with the main characters of the Pokemon anime let's give other girls a chance for example miette Shauna vierty (Pokemon I choose you movie) melody (Pokemon power of one movie) Giselle duplica aria Jasmine Whitney Zoey Candice maylene gerogia Rosa Hilda skyla bianca (Pokemon heroes movie) bianca (unova) Shauna (hoenn) Flannery Phoebe (ghost type trainer of the hoenn elite 4) Erika Sabrina lily daisy violet (Misty's sisters) Bea nessa Gloria Marnie (female characters from Pokemon sword and shield games) koharu (gen 8 Pokemon anime I added her because she's never once been paired with ash before Just like Marnie nessa Bea and Gloria haven't been paired with ash yet since no one really tried to yet so hopefully by putting them on the list they get there own chapter with ash so they finally get their turn in the spotlight with him) princess Silvia (the girl who looks exactly like dawn and gave her togekiss to dawn) and Angie I know it's alot of girls but I just had to make a list of the ones we don't see very often since we mostly see the main female characters with ash alot and I just wanted to help that's all

Honestly one of my favourites so far! Wouldn't mind seeing more of Iris

Spider-man kiss, nice touch.

Nice new chapter, never been the biggest fan of Iris as a character personally, but I can tell that you’ve done her justice. Keep at it, I’ll be sad to see this series end, but I can’t wait to see what you do with the finale.
Yavol