Okay, I'm back, I have my account, and my head is much clearer! I am ready to review.
First off, the plot is moving smoothly. Rereading the whole thing it actually makes a whole lot more sense now. I'm excited to see what you've got ready next.

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Welp, hopefully Roose doesn't manage to free whatever is sealed in those caverns, heck it might even be Sansa who manages to foil the Bolton's plans in this case.

Anyway, don't think CoA's plan is unbelievable, forcing refugees into cities was a legitimate strategy to exhausts resources and lower morale. I can only hope that it doesn't succeed.

Small note. Bronze doesn't rust, it corrodes. And very, very slowly. Bronze age tools have been recovered that had bronze heads that were still functional. Those swords would be intact.

it's time for some enemies to die, how about this new group.

I have a feeling Jon would fight another creepy monster in the future. Thanks for update and stay safe.

Rather like your reasoning ole Bright Lord. That and how Davos remembers Stannis’s words

Fewer indeed

And so it begins. Act II

Fck, thats bad...

good fic

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Really looking forward to Jon realising his actual identity and giving stannis the boot, just imagine, the eternal demon slayer white wolf king. Hopefully as he syncs with more heart trees he gains more wraith abilities out of the 2 shadow games like slow motion, double jump and a whole bunch of other abilities from them. Looking forward to the next update m8.

Can yu tell us one thing: is the Stranger an OC or a canon character?

At this point, it's too much of Jon. Break up the chapters with other characters.

At this point I want to say something critic-like, but I have a concussion so I'll just say that I both love this fic and frustrated by it. You shit on too many characters, you make an incredible blend of SOM and ASOIAF, and you're story is so wrapped around Jon I don't know whether it's good or bad anymore. You're introducing so many outside elements, both native and OC to ASOIAF and SOM, that it's kind of wrecking everything. Company of the Axe that's sworn to wiping out Stark blood? Okay, until you make them Seven worshipping zealots. Having a supposed Dark Lord with Orcs and a Ring of Power that turns out to be a Balrog? Absolutely amazing, until you wrap in many other side distractions that makes hard to focus on the main point.
In the end, there's just too much. Just dial it down to a few select options, and leave it there.
And now, my head is starting to hurt so I'm going to say goodbye and stay safe.

Just when I think that you can't add more plot and suspense, you do it again! You make us believe that there is only one right path to follow in the plot, and out of nowhere, you end up giving us a curve. please take as much time as for the next chapter... but if you can please! give us the next chapter as soon as possible of this wonderful story.