Finish plzzzzzz (very first chapter u said u hate unfinished stories) and also this is the best fanfic ive ever read:D

I sincerely hope Goku kicks Vegeta's ass.

Also, Chichi is hella annoying.
I've been fantasizing about making a fanfiction when Goku combines Blue with SSJ3, in response to Caulifla being tortured by Vegeta, who's doing that because Goku's never serious in their fights.

Sound retarded?

Anyways PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ continue the goddamn story! It's one of the best ever.

wheres the chapter 18?

That was AWESOME!

But the only thing I didn't like was that you followed that same goddamned trope that so many others are obsessed with: the vampiric soul-bonding bite. Such a RIDICULOUS concept when used by anyone or anything other than a vampire, which a Saiyan most assuredly isn't!

Please continue the story.

Please please please update and don’t forget about this story...I LOVE it so much!

Been several years but I watched all of Dragon Ball, all of DBZ and DBGT and never really liked Chi-Chi. The only reason she seemed to be around was to be a major bitch to everybody. No idea why she ever stayed "married" to Goku, she had to have known from the start that Goku pretty much lives to fight the next opponent.

please continue this story

Hope you update soon... i know it's almost been a year but this really good

Update the story please

Are you going to update again?

plz make a new one

What the fuck, man!?

Liking your direction here :) update soon!

Great chapter plz make the next ive been waiting very patiently and I believe tht ur fans have aswell