Reviews for Izuku with a Guitar
Darraiter chapter 5 . 4/21
"Ironic that it was powerless me who took down the robot"? Dude, you took the exam with a WEAPON! Be thankful that nobody decide to kick you out for playing the guitar while everybody else was taking the exam! I can't even speak when I finish, even less make so much noise. And what's the point of having robo-citizens? You could say that it's so teachers can see who shows signs of being observant and rational even in dangerous situations, but... Do these robots attack like the others? Do they run away from the teenagers? And in case you say that it's a way for them to earn rescue points, how would that work? Do they need to save the robots? From what? What a coincidence, that ONLY Izuku and Katsuki actually saw that these robots where civilians.

Don't get me wrong, it was a good idea. I just don't think it was used as it should.

Also, you need to control the way you make characters curse. You practically write "shit" at least once for most of the phrases in this chapter, sometimes consecutely.
Darraiter chapter 1 . 4/19
There are some things I can't quite understand. Izuku was... How old when his father decided it was a good idea to gave his son what can only be considerate a sonic weapon? Also, why did he need to learn so many martial arts? His weapon is useful in both long and close range. You could say it's in case he lose the guitar, but... Still, I think it's a little exaggerated. You cant possibly master (or even be proficient) so many styles at his age.

Also, you tend to change izuku's POV during some parts, like "I (izuku) equip your (i guess the reader's?) guitar, and I (izuku) put your (whose, again?) on my (izuku) belt"
FairyJuice chapter 3 . 3/1
If Kacchan is gonna be providing sound effects and occasionally back up beats, I'm totally fine with this rival thing.
3timesawarrior chapter 3 . 1/12
I appreciate the numerous homestuck references, and I love your works. Keep up the good work.
Scribble Novice chapter 15 . 12/25/2019
Alexandria? Legend? Eidolon? Worm Reference? that's rare
Mazongian chapter 24 . 11/30/2019
I can't really get enough of the sheer insanity that is this story.

Give in to the temptation though. Make the Izuku Quartet. Wreak havoc and meyham
Dear Death father dearest chapter 23 . 10/27/2019
Yay this is good and a pass time
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
From a pure grammar and structure standpoint, this thing is a train wreck. No wonder you’re averaging two reviews per chapter.
Corvilius chapter 19 . 6/4/2019
fooly cooly guitar and scooter shenanigans!
toxicsunshinexox chapter 3 . 5/14/2019
GASP! ARE YOU A HOMESTUCK? The chatlogs remind me of homestuck
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 1 . 4/27/2019
keep up the amazing work!

I LOVE AMBITIOUS QUIRKLESS IZUKU STORIES LIKE THESE!
RedKnight21 chapter 17 . 4/5/2019
Can't wait to see Endeavor get his ass kicked. I can understand how Bakugou would win in the end, gadgets and skill will only take you so fair against someone who can match you and has an intense power.

Look, I love the swearing and memes and the four-wall breaking, but can you call back on them just a bit. It just feels like if someone swears every other sentence then it just feels dirty and cheap, and not in the fun way.

So if your fallowing a bit of FLCL will you give Izuku a mini guitar for long and precise range attacks. Maybe give him that cool moped that can somehow not break from anything and even fly.

P.S: This is my opinion, more of something I noticed but ... why hasn't anyone given Izuku a freaking bow and arrow. I mean the kid is green 90% of the time in any FanFiction and even cannon. I'm over here wondering why hasn't anyone turned this kid into the Green Arrow or Hawkeye, who is stronger since proven by death battle. Plus trick Arrows would be a perfect weapon for Izuku since with his precise mind and fast acting he could chose any arrow on the fly.

I mean Izuku as been turned into a bunch of things not even related to his character look such as Luffy from One Piece, Static Shock, One Punch man, Batman, DareDevil, Spider-Man, Venom, Iron Man, a younger Doctor Strange, Courier Six from Fallout, Uganda Knuckles(Don't ask), Ben 10, a Saiyan, Brook from One Piece(My Favorite), The Flash, Ippo from Fighting Spirit, hell even three different Jokers from One Piece, DC, and Persona.

I'm just saying people should change it up.

Maybe make Izuku more like Falcon from Marvel, or Nathen Drake from Uncharted and have Izuku running around finding long lost treasure.

This is more me venting any maybe giving you an idea.

Thanks for the story, and keep up the good work!
bigrig56 chapter 17 . 4/5/2019
Would have been more impactful for the quirkless if Deku won
netapel chapter 5 . 3/16/2019
holy moly is that a mother fuckin' jojo reference?
Wan323 chapter 16 . 3/10/2019
I love this story. If you try to take it seriously (which too many people do) you don't like it. But if you accept that it isn't serious, that this story is there for pure memes, that this story is there to piss of the Tenya Iida's of fanfiction... It's beautiful.
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