You said you wouldn’t abandon this, but it’s been nearly two years... I hope that you are in good health and aren’t failing school, and of course you come before this FanFiction, but I really hope this gets continued at some point.

I love it so far! Can’t wait to see where the plot goes!

Hey man, hope you get okay soon

Hey man, that's tough. But you need to think of yourself first. Writing is a way to enjoy ourselves, as well as reading. If you rush things out, not only will you get worse mentally, but the chapter will not be what you and the readers were expecting.

So, in conclusion, take your time, think of your health and take care of yourself because we'll be here, waiting as long as it takes for you to get back to full steam.

I'm glad to see that you took my advice in consideration (I don't remember if I answered to you pm? If I didn't I'm sorry really x. Take the time you need. Writing should be an escape and not a chore so if you don't feel like it, then don't. Anyway, rest and get betterI'll come back when the chapter is complete :3

take as long as you need, if you keep doing partial updates like this then that'll satisfy readers that you haven't abandoned the story and you can rest.

Yo, you got this dude, I'm super looking forward to how this story pans out. If you ever need some help or just want to talk, message me and I'll do my best to remember that O can get messages on here. Keep it up man!

Nice work. A shame the war ended the way it did. But I get why you made it like that. Can't wait for the next one!

sounds like it could develop into a solid story.

I like how you tell the story. You have a lot of passion and emotion. My one critique may be that Percy is overpowered. I’ve always taken his powers with water as primitive control. He’s not son of the ice god or the blood god. He’s son of the sea god. He controls waves and hurricanes. Primitive things. This is my opinion. I like your story. I really do. Just maybe tone down on the abilities a little.

So far seems to be well written and structured. I hope you will update this story soon to see where it ends up.

A strong start. I look forward to more

Well dang that was intense

You're going in a pretty good direction with this so far! I hope you continue! Also have you planned the basic outlines for any of the future chapters? I think that would help with update time. Great chapter! And the underworld water is pretty cool. Also how is the presence of magic gonna effect Percy?

Seems like an interesting story. Hope you will update soon