Reviews for Ruby-B312: The Fall of Reach
Mr.WigZ chapter 7 . 6/22
So thaaat's why she has Jun's tags, sorry
Mr.WigZ chapter 3 . 6/21
A grenade would cost, at the very least, $70. I don't think you could find a $5 grenade even if it was a decommissioned one at an army surplus store.
jtmarch12591 chapter 8 . 12/8/2019
Of course Ruby gets that assassin's creed achievement
Reclaimer SIERRA-G343 chapter 5 . 7/11/2019
Comments on Ch. 5:

Yep... AI is a crapshoot. Just ask anyone who's played Smash Bros against an AI opponent...
Reclaimer SIERRA-G343 chapter 3 . 7/10/2019
Comments for B312-FoR Ch. 3:

Every time I see a person getting in a Warthog, I always think of the Tejano music that the Reds' Warthog plays every time they drive it... the same music that graces my alarm clock on my phone, no less.

Didn't the same issue with VR sickness happen to those who watched Cloverfield? I seem to recall reading that...

And those troops that fell when that bridge collapsed? Sometimes, if you listen carefully, you can hear the Wilhelm Scream among them. This is difficulty-dependent, however, and doesn't show up every time. This stock sound effect is most notable for its use in A New Hope, all the way up to The Force Awakens. Since Rogue One, they've replaced the effect with a different one... but I digress...

-CreeperSlayerL421
Reclaimer SIERRA-G343 chapter 8 . 5/26/2019
Trivia about the Truck Elite (the one who blew himself up... lol):

The "blarg" may be a nod to RVB. In that show, Sangheili only say "honk" or "blarg" whenever they talk. It's reached the point where Tucker's Sangheili child (long story) borrowed Tucker's "Bow-chicka-bow-wow" catchphrase as "blarg-chicka-honk-honk." I, personally, choose to question this choice of humor.

TL;DR: Blarg RVB reference.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/8/2019
I checked your page far more often than I'd like to admit after the last chapter waiting for the finale. I also read B-312 up to the current point twice. It'sbeeb a really enjoyable read, I especially liked the fluff bit of WBY getting to see Remnant from space. I look forward to this Ruby building Crescent Rose, and seeing team RWBY get a moment to relax and recover now that the covenant has been repelled. Thanks for writing this, I usually don't go for crossovers but your writing makes it work.
Spartastic 4 chapter 9 . 4/8/2019
Well, it’s been quite the ride my dude. Hope to see ya again in your next story.
osterreicher97 chapter 9 . 4/7/2019
A very satisfying conclusion to all of this, and I look forward to seeing how your other stories develop.
Shadow Walker of Fire chapter 9 . 4/7/2019
Awesome chapter. I am curious why you didn't give all the spartans the name Mendez, he did train them all.
Helljumper206 chapter 9 . 4/7/2019
Finally singed this story off. I do like what you did at the end with Noble's funeral. It's original, its great and can't wait to see what you have next for the main story as well as what you have for Summer Harvest.
dovah117 chapter 9 . 4/7/2019
Fynally Noble Team has a place where they can rest, what beautiful endind, so a week? Eh I can wait that, finally where going to see the consequences of the Covenant and UNSC arrival on Remnant, so hyped for that! And will Ruby create Crescent Rose? If is a yes, then the Reaper can appear when she gets REALLY mad
PoofyOhio chapter 9 . 4/7/2019
I’ve always been conflicted on your representation of Ruby/Noble six, on one hand she is a unrepentant killing machine of epic proportions, on the other she’s a very chatty high functioning sociopath, with a penchant for saying mildly annoying/amusing things. So conflicted. Anyway I still enjoyed reading this.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/7/2019
Will Summer end up back on Remnant with the Spirit of Fire and its crew!? Will Ruby eventually build her Sniper Scythe Weapon from canon in this story!?
JimmyHall24 chapter 9 . 4/7/2019
"Over fifty million people live down there."

"Now it's a ghost town."
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