Vean here. This is beautifully written.

Wowza. Thanks.

MY Wish is for you to continue this story ;-)

I was thinking your end is open to more updates of their relationship , with many ups and downs...don’t you think? :-)

Oh dear what a story! More of it please.

I enjoy your work and would enjoy a sequel here , more chapters with these wonderful characters you have created. Do please keep writing! I’m reading!

This has the potential to be something awesome, please continue this story!

Thanks so much for the update! This story is close to our heart.

Great! Thank you , but one complaint though it’s too short. We are now in love with your characters! Keep going with this story , we love it. We dont know maybe your muse will come back...reconsider pleassssse

After reading chapter one my little heart sank too, just like Maura's, but then a spark of hope went through me and I saw the light at the end of the tunnel...home, finally! Oh Jane you fool, you've could have lost her...

Thank you for this beautiful story, it brightened my day! ;D

Yes. Yes, it is time for Jane to come home. To her one and only home...Maura. Thanks for sharing this sadly sweet story of my two favorite ladies. I'm hoping in the end that the distance they endured will make their relationship ten times stronger. Now that they know what is at stake...what loss really feels like, hopefully, it will make them work harder to keep what they have with each other.

That's a sweet-sad story !
Could be the beginning of a longer one?
Thank you very much for writing and sharing :-)

Thanks heaps for sharing

Love it. Really sweet but realistically difficult and painful. Love these ladies, you did em justice. Thanks!

Loved it, so delicate..would have been a better ending. Thanks for sharing!