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Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2019 Update, just use the premise of the show and include this form of naruto. |
ohsofrosty chapter 1 . 6/10/2019 i liked this idea of this story. i am hoping that you are continue it. if you do continue is this a naruto x korra story, or naruto x harem? |
redlox2 chapter 1 . 10/25/2018 so far i am really excited to read this story! So Naruto has the ability to use all 4 elements but will he able to use them at the same time? (an ability granted to Avatars since they host Raava?) cant wait for you to continue this! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2018 Oh I remember |
Johnathan Rawls chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 I say update soon |
Demon Bro the 14th chapter 1 . 9/29/2018 Very interesting please continue will Naruto be able to bend the sub elements like lightning, metal, lava, blood etc I mean I would kinda make since as he was taught by the first bender of the main 4 elements it wouldn’t be that much of a stretch to think he is more in-tune with the elements especially after being in the spirit world 10,000 years |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2018 Please continue this story. |
ericmw8 chapter 1 . 9/28/2018 Continue! |
Kakumeizan chapter 1 . 9/27/2018 Dope |
Newotouto chapter 1 . 9/27/2018 a good start. |
hawkeyestratos1996 chapter 1 . 9/26/2018 interesting. |