Reviews for The Pit
jgk641 chapter 19 . 2/14
great story keep up the good work
Nina Arevalo chapter 19 . 11/15/2019
please up date soon I hope you do I really like to see what happens next.
Nina Arevalo chapter 19 . 9/17/2019
when are you going to update? I hope it is soon.
ShadowMyDog chapter 19 . 7/4/2019
What happened tp chapter 20?
Elijah Knightz chapter 19 . 2/7/2019
this is awesome and I love it
LazyTyrant chapter 19 . 2/2/2019
Loving your cant get enough of it keep up the good writing
Guest chapter 18 . 1/12/2019
Hehehe careful there Amber! Good chapter
Robert Escher chapter 6 . 1/13/2019
Nah, I dig it... you're having Nick be introspective... WE the readers know (or at least are pretty sure) that Judy wants him, but he doesn't know it's anything other than lust.

-Esch
GusTheBear chapter 18 . 1/13/2019
can't wait to see judy's reaction to Nick playing with the little ones. I wonder if Amber is going to have to learn the hard way not to mess with Judy's fox, nice work buddy, as always looking forward to the next chapter.
Sapperjoe85 chapter 18 . 1/12/2019
Competition is getting thick in the burrow.
BrutusDeagon chapter 17 . 1/1/2019
Would not be surprised if they wake up with judy in the bed too and no memory of how she got there
Guest chapter 17 . 1/1/2019
yay, an update! Kuddos to you and your beta, it was a good chapter
Sapperjoe85 chapter 16 . 12/25/2018
Story advancement
BrutusDeagon chapter 16 . 12/24/2018
Not bad just short
Troy Groomes chapter 15 . 11/20/2018
I wonder how her parents react to Nick now that him and Judy talked things outare willing to try things out
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