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Well well, what about after reading 29 chapters of this story? I have many definitions in mind but for now only one seems to fit well: Wonderful.

For me, this fanfic is one of the best CG's fanfictions.

Logan / Soul is an excellent OC.

I'm happy that from the beginning you changed the canon for save Rolo (I mean, I loved the character of Rolo, I wonder why people hate him).

Unfortunately I don't have much to say now ... ah wait, I have one thing to say: Logan x CC. At first I thought the pair for Logan was Kallen but, after reading the chapter of Kamine Island, I must say that the relationship between CC and Logan is perfect. Keep it up, I recommend! See ya!

Good chapter with all the action, Kallen escaping from her cell and the revelation of Jeremiah’s true loyalty. If it’s still possible, for the main pairing with your OC, I would suggest Kallen as they have good chemistry and have really been through a lot together from the start as Black Knights and accomplices and Kallen deserves happiness after everything that happened to her and the protagonists. I would definitely take LoganxKallen, LelouchxCC (like in the epilogue of Lelouch of the Resurrection Movie) and SuzakuxEuphemia as the main pairings for this story.
Good luck with the continuation of your stories!

I suppose at this point C.C would be a better partner for Logan, since the last time I reviewed Kallen has grown much closer to Lelouch whilst C.C has grown closer to Logan. At this point I would be disappointed if they didn't end up together.

Kallen and Logan have good chemistry, personally though, I'd recommend someone less popular. That's just me though, since I like reading new things and Kallen is used in pretty much every CG fanfic ever I can't help but be bored of reading stories where she's a romantic interest.

Considering Geass usually evolves at a certain point, does this mean Logan's Geass will become more powerful? as in instead of being able to see if someone is lying he would be able to force them to tell the truth with eye contact. It would be reasonable for his powers to take this approach whenever the Geass appears in his second eye.

Logan's outfit makes no sense, two shirts a waistcoat and a jacket? bro, is he going to live on an icicle? he's gonna be piloting a knightmare frame which probably gets very hot/warm whilst looking like he's gonna say "winter is coming" with a serious expression? not to mention those colors, white with orange with a small amount of black actually works, the problem is that you have a majority of black which just swallows up the white and orange... I don't know what you're trying to describe him as but right now he just looks like an edge lord with bad taste in my mind.

You realize Lelouch names his soldiers after chess pieces based on their worth on the field right? So why is Logan a pawn? arguably the worst piece in the game, it might be the most versatile aside from the Queen but still that's only after it promotes. K1 would suit him better.

As a guest and relatively new,
Loving this story so far, so many ripples in the tale that deviate from the main series and it actually works. Even better then what’s already canon, truly a rare gem amongst the Fanfic community... at least to me. If it’s not to late, would love to see LoganxKallen, because that kind of ship is rarely used from what I’ve seen. It would make sense, after a year of Lelouch being lost who knows what bonds they may have had since Logan convinces her that she was never a pawn like canon. Though if not then LoganxC.C. would also work, considering the same circumstances would apply and Logan did say not even she deserved to be lonely. Either one works, though my first is definitely LoganxKallen (Logallen... Kallogan?) They definitely have what it takes to be a major power couple with their Knightmare frame piloting skills that exceed Cornelia and Suzaku who were considered unbeatable until Zero, Soul, R.R. and Q1 entered the game and changed it. 5 Stars for me, keep it up.

(Doing my best to hold down my inner shipper from celebrating) This chapter did Shirley justice better then the movies and I am grateful for it. An underrated character that deserves better. V.V messed up and the Black Knights are about to come knocking on his door. He should have never underestimated Jeremiah's loyalty. Though the question on how to deal with the children must be made. How will they justify killing kids and civilians since that's what put Zero's leadership in question in canon? The way in which Kallen got broken out of jail reminds me of the Knights of Hanoi in Yu-gi-oh Vrains.

I really like this chapter an I'm glad that you didn't kill Shirley, that make me really happy. Keep doing a great job.

Love this fanfic cant wait for the next chapter 33

Good chapter. Maybe Logan x Milly might be great. They have good and fun dynamics between them, they know each other for years as well and Milly is no longer engaged with Lloyd.

love the story. if their are pairings in this story hoping for a Logan x C.C.

Great story so far can't wait to see more. Also have you chosen the pairings yet if not Please do a LoganxKallen pairing for this stroy.

Kallen