So this was a bit of a surprise. Going from king of the goblins to space battles in little as 5 chapters. To be fair it has been ages since I read the story and checked up on it. This will hopefully be as good of a read as The Potter Attraction was. Cheers

Please come back for this amazing story

Do you plan on updating.?

please come back to this story. it is really good so far

Great story please continue

I hope this story has not been abandoned.

thanks for the story

Hello lol
Good chapter
I hope some people will create some 3D printer To and chakra seal on ship.
Also please have the terran discover omnitool and help to upgrade the soldier gear with custom upgradable armor and weapons.
I hope someone think to create some mobile armor and mobile suit to help the war on different battlefield like ground, air, water and space.
Also i think games like Supreme commander, C&C red alert and C&C tiberium can give ideas of units and weapons like ions, sonic and laser weapon or floating tank...
It world be a good ideas to read show some tech see with ideas of gears and units is possible and those are not or if they have the people and the money To create them.
I think some people will want to create some gundams or energy weapons.
Also please have some new shield created from the mass effect shield of the turians.
And please have someone create new stealth capacity for the ships and the soldier gear with invisibility capacity.
I hope some program will use the ODST and Spartans program of Halo to create new branch of the navy and new options for the war.
Imagine some base send like a missile or a torpedo from a ship like the ODST, invisible and mobile like the crawler from command&conquer tiberium 4.
Please see to create some super soldier program for the army and some new weapons program.
Dont forget to let us read about the R&D departement but also the information gagneront département.
I hope the terrans find about biotic.
I cant wait to read the reactions about batarians slave market and what the council have done to the quarians.
I hope Earth production to go in high gear and find other FTL method like warp, jumpspace, slipstream space or hyperspace.
So like that Earth will have some options for attack.
Also think of missiles and torpedos with FTL jump tech and some long tech attack.
So write a lot, go wild and have fun.
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Sajuuk

Great story I can’t wait for more.

This has all the makings for an Honor Harrington level space opera. Keep up the great work!

cool

well written, tho for armorplating I was kind of expecting it to be covered in vanishing charms to deal with space debris and projectiles, would make tings unbalanced AF but sounds like the most obvious solution to me

Wow, i really like the beginnng of this fiction.
In a side Note, what Do you think about the idea that Not all quarian could be saved from rannoch and that they managed to live longside the geth.

At first the war is justified but as you go on its loosing its justification. Why is the alliance not digging out information out of enemy computers? No, no one cares for more information or else they would have accessed the omni tools or worked with a translation program to learn more about the enemy. This does take time but they have had months, also having access to partial bateran language. This should help in translating turian language. So my point stands of asking why is no one looking into why it happened? It's not plausible.

That thing about armor and wepons is true . The thing with hermione namesake is confunsing as hell . Maybe you could made a chapter only with potter clan with their reaction to war . Couldnt they use some form of runes to make their armor better ? And about clones marines could be send to a enemy ship but instead of boarding they would produce clones to board so they could use more clones like that in boarding . About the turians will they have a large navy they are out of practice of how to fight a total war , they fought only pirates and small wars . This combined with their lack of intelligence on the enemy may spell their doom and give the earth time to truly prepare for war . And the turians will be unable to send more then 50% of their fleet because of other presing needs . So a reduce force who is out of practice against an aggresive and magic and chakra powered human navy who fight to revenge an unprovoked atrack like the USA in WWII . But a question : how did the potter clan prevent others of using their gift for evil like voldemort ? Because this is my main objectio for others to gain thise abilities and because the potter attraction is unfinished i remain with this question .