who is this guy?

I have to be honest here I LOVE that boss in the game especially the song he sings. Also nice on giving him a new verse in the song.

No I have a word Mario. Ha!

Wow Mario May be mad at that but he didn’t have to treat them to kick sonic and dk out of the fanfic sheeh. Also we will never drop it Mario ty and shantae.

Now beep-o is breaking the fourth wall? Not surprised at this point.

This fanfiction was really great, I loved it a lot. But there were somethings that we're really confusing, like why is Ty and Shantae in the story, they aren't in even in Smash Bros (well Shantae is in spirit mode for Ultimate). Like I don't wanna hate on the fact that they're in the story but it's a bit confusing. The other thing that confused me was that Rabbid Kong was in the story helping the characters, I know he turns good in DK Adventure but he doesn't come along with the players, also since he's there, he can easily take out the bosses because of how big he is. Another thing I'm confused about is the Mysterious figure and Susie. Kirby isn't even in the story. Plus in chapter 10, the Pokemon Trainer isn't supposed to be Ash, it's supposed to be Red, I know that's a little thing to pick on but it just annoys me a bit. The Last thing I'm confused about is the amount of cursing, they don't curse in the actual game (well Beep-O does but it's censored). But even though there are somethings in this story I disliked, I still like it a lot, for it's humor and dialogue.

Wait, what why is Susie here? Kirby's not even in this! Whatever, still great!

Mario really jinxed it. Also I love how Son, Ty and Shantae didn't get sucked into the void by basically being cowards.

Yeah! Solid ending! So the heroes have aquired a bit of tech to level the playing field with Tabuu! And I have a feeling that when As, Kirby, Link, and Pit come to visit the mushroom kingdom and see that statue of Rabbid Peach...
They are going to have SOOOOO many questions... So have fun explaining that Mario! And hmm... The cloaked man placed an order with Dyntos. Wonder what it is... And I wonder what other followers he has...
Anyway, once again great job and DEFINITELY looking forward to the next story! :D

And it's over! I really enjoyed reading it as always! Who knows? Maybe I might borrow some inspirations from your version to my version!
I just checked out your DeviantArt gallery to see which story is next, and it's a Pokémon one, right? If that's the case, then after it is one of the new Zelda stories, which is another one I'm looking forward to. Once October 20th arrives, I really hope you'll enjoy my version of Mario Rabbids: Kingdom Battle! Fairy out! ;)

I forget what you have plan next for the Super Mario Team, but nice job on the chapter. I saw some Rabbid cartoons in the past and it was pretty funny. I haven't play this game but I watch a bit of the walkthrough. The Rabbids didn't just had a crossover with Mario, they had one with Rayman too. Make you wonder how many crazy adventures those Rabbids will have.

Well, I wait for the next story! Can't wait to see what type of adventures Mario and his friends go through next!

Well, looks like Tabuu's gonna have to warn his followers about such a device that his brother invented to cancel out his power given to them.

Hmm... I wonder what exactly is that red box...?
Well, I'll only be able to find out in the next chapter, which is definitely the final one. Can't wait for it! :D

Tabuu's going to expect his brother to make yet another move.

Stupid writer's block on my computer... So I was only able to read and review on my phone. Anyways, you were not kidding about a surprise: I did not expect Tabuu to show up at all! Poor Spawny... :(
Are you going to add the battle with Bwario, Bwaluigi and the Lava Queen? Just wondering.