Another great chapter!
The plot starts picking speed! Man, I can’t already tell the trip back will be anything but uneventful.
I hope you can update soon.
Keep the great work!

Nice chapter!
Now an unstable princess has aura infused strength and a semblance. That couldn’t go wrong.
By the way, I would like to point out that pipe smoking, like cigar smoking, doesn’t cause lung cancer like cigarettes do. Of course second hand smoke is dangerous, nobody can deny that, but when you smoke a pipe/cigar you don’t inhale the smoke. You “taste” it and keep it in your mouth before blowing it out.
Also, although pipe/cigar smoking is much less harmful than cigarette smoking (the equivalent would be like drinking a cup of beer, as new papers have found out), the cancer most associated with it is is mouth and tongue cancer.
Sorry for the unasked info dump, but as a cigar smoker myself, it gets annoying when people compare it to a cigarette. There is a HUGE difference.
Keep the great work!

Great chapter!
If I had any critic to make, it would be that you forgot to add Lily’s age!
Come on, don’t let her out like that.

Goddamn! What a chapter!
You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time! Jaume has to have one of the biggest set of balls in the world. Being so bold as to lie like that, and better yet, it worked!
It reminded me in games when you fuck up a part of a event but you can continue by doing the next one correctly. Jaune walk a fine line there. Screwing up but rectifying (somewhat) next.
Can’t wait to see what happens next!

Two months without update is a bit too much for me. Please don't abandon this story

Been about a month, the wait it killing me and what happens next.

We need a update for this

I'm really enjoying this story more than the few I've ever seen of Kuroinu. Mostly because I don't like it and I have no intention of watching any comic book or animation referring to, absolutely disgust history. All I know is the invasion order and the name of the princesses) because of the stories that have been published here.
Now, the reason I liked your story, is why it's certainly the most realistic version I've seen about how you could deal with the situation, in several ways. I don't go into details because of some personal hurry, but I hope you can understand.

Pretty good so far. Like that Jaune is not op and doesn't pull random powers out of his ass. He actually as to work for his victory's. Plus it makes it all the more impact-full when Juane cant save anyone and has to leave them.

One thine I love about this story is all the little details you put into the scene and dialogues. Like how people say the need to go to the bathroom and what not. Makes everything feel alive. I also like things as little as the water sloshing back and forth when Jaune was holding it. Little things like that make this all the more fun to read!

Keep up the good work! I'm eager for the next chap!

I want Jaune to heal with his semblance

Nope sorry that bit with the tower killed the want to keep reading this.

But very good story idea and before that happened this story was interesting to read, have you thought about doing alternate idea's with the concept. Like instead of being brought into this mess by one of the Eostia girls, it was the two gods of remnant who give Jaune the power to create and control grimm like Salem does.

Would love to see those dog's faces at a horde of alpha beo-wolves coming at them.

Or perhaps his semblance allows him to shapeshift into white version of Grimm types kinda like how Beast Boy power works from teen titans?

Loving the story, I read through all 17 chapters and I'm absolute looking forward to next update.

Good

Wonder if every princess Jaune saves is going to attack him in a list filled haze.

Alright...I see ur going the route of helping the land after it happened. I hate rape. i really do, but I'll read on because their is a chance to save some. i just hope you at least have them keep some semblence of their mind, and not broken to the rape.