| Reviews for Dawn Breaks over Westeros |
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   AngorMike chapter 12 . 8/28 I've been enjoying the story, thank you. That said, I don't really like Cersei, and I agree with your earlier post that she's got too much plot armor. The best I'd want to see as a future for her is a brood mare, not part of the harem. Being part of the harem implies (at least in my mind) that Naruto would actually care for her a bit. I'd rather not see that happen. But, it is of course all up to you. Thanks gain for the story. |
| nagiten chapter 4 . 8/23 shouldnt jon/naruto have three swords in the dream/vison he was placing blackfrye in the storage while another sword was already there...or was the other sword darksister and he just switched them? |
| boban094 chapter 13 . 8/22 Excellent story so far. I just hope you get some time to post another chapter. Keep up the good work! :D |
| spirouFr chapter 13 . 8/16 thanks |
| SauronGorthaur1 chapter 8 . 8/14 Why are Ryswell and Dustin on Ramsay's side if lady Barbry doesn't like Ramsay |
| SauronGorthaur1 chapter 4 . 8/14 and Shiera Seastar |
| SauronGorthaur1 chapter 3 . 8/13 For the harem - Tyene Sand, Nymeria Sand, Ellaria Sand, Dacey Mormont, Val, Arianne Martell, Barbrey Dustin, Alys Karstark, Wylla Manderly, Wynafryd Manderly, Allyria Dayne, Ashara Dayne, Cersei Lannister, Joanna Lannister, Rhaella Targaryen, Rhaenys Targaryen, Roslin Frey, Jeyne Westerling, Talisa Maegyr, Walda Frey (light), Míriel and Cerena Lannister, Myrcella Baratheon, Jeyne Poole, Beth Cassel. |
| Issei ODR chapter 3 . 7/28 Excelente capitulo |
| Issei ODR chapter 2 . 7/28 Modo edo tensei |
| Issei ODR chapter 1 . 7/28 Melisandre |
| shinobinoyami16 chapter 13 . 7/16 Will Arya join the harem as she was the closest to Jon before they left for kingslanding |
| andjelija.nenic chapter 1 . 7/12 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| bloodbrother 18 chapter 13 . 7/9 Can't wait to see what happens next |
| AspiringWriterInWayOverHisHead chapter 13 . 6/30 Ahhh, I was kind of hoping for him to take Yara as the opposite of a Saltwife, a Landwench perhaps. It would have been the final nail of delicious irony to the end of the Ironborn. |
| AspiringWriterInWayOverHisHead chapter 1 . 6/30 I was so confused, then I realized this was the TV series nonsense, not the books. |
