Can you make Shirou fuse with Archer so that he could become OP

Wtf!
This honest to kami saga of a fic has just 45 reviews?
ppl r idiots.
Enjoyed this chapter so much I skipped breakfast.
And breakfast for me is the MOST important meal of the month.

The story has potential though unfortunately is has been presented a tad incoherently so far. I know whst is going on and yet it still feels confusing and could be more organized. I am not talking about the disaster as that is chaotic but the story has just started and wasn't even able to get around to the point of establishing itself. The omakes was hilarious at least. In any case, the story seems worth waiting to see where it goes.

This was such a good chapter. I love this story!
But why... why the CLIFFHANGER!
Anyways, please keep up the great work!
I need more of this story in my life.

Welcome brother. Now you know the curse of JoJo.

You can’t know where things are now...Wait.

Are up to Part 8 or Part 5?

I hope Cinder get trashed by Shirou. It would be nice to see hr grovel even if she survive and come more powerful because of it.

Hype

Haven't you ever heard the phrase. Don't bring a gun to a Nuclear missile Fight.

Red Hood and Outlaws Akame ga kill crossover
Red Hood is trained by Batman himself and the league of Assassins.
Arsenal is trained by Green Arrow.
Red Hood
Arsenal
Starfire
Artemis Amazon version
Bizarro
Joker Daughter
Essence
The Outlaws led by Red Hood finds themselves in another world where they declar war on crime greed and corruption.

well this is wonderful yeah hmmmm all of that is awesome and that omake hahahaha great

NOW queue actual interaction between fate and rwby
im most curious on how everyone will react to a guy thats literally turning into a pincushion of swords and becoming a man not of flesh but of steel

ive read a few fanfictions but this is the first one where he is still suffering from UBW trying to escape him when he gets into the RWBY verse

Got this far, but this doesn't seem like my kind of story.

The technical details (spelling and grammar) are fine and the idea is solid, but the narrative is so over-wrought that I got bored of reading. At first it was an excellent way to show how devastated Shirou was at the end of the War, even with him making rather out of character jokes and references. By the end of this chapter I was just done with the whole thing.

I'm also not a real big fan of the bit with Arturia in the first chapter, nor the bit with Summer in this chapter. Some people might get a kick out of it, but it came across as forced to me.

At the end of the day I leave with the impression that the author had a lot of ideas that seemed "cool" and decided to toss them all into the pot. Not my taste, but some people will likely dig that kind of story.

To the author, thank you for taking the time to share this story. It is appreciated.

Thanks

Great chapter, Although I am wondering what The Presense is, exactly. While I do read and fav-ed Third Fang, the Presense is not clear enough for me to get, so can you explain to me what it is, please?

Okay, that ending Excalibur scene was really bad $$!
I hope it stays, or a Shirou gains the ability to project it without breaking his mind. I love how he has Archer's arm, along with Avalon, and if he got Excalibur to work/Saber is still helping him, than Avalon should be able to heal him. I just hope that he still has the shroud of Martin. But anyways, please keep up the great work!