Your grammar is on the level of a second grade child. Are you that young? No? Well update your story, no one likes anyone who does a half assed job in any way. If you think your not a cunt you’ll be surprised what a majority of people will tell you. I’m only treating you like your treating us readers after all. You didn’t put. Care whatsoever into your story, and if you do say “ oh you don’t understand what writers go through, why don’t you write a story “ because I have. I’ve taken comments seriously. I didn’t throw shit out of a toilet In order To get a following.

Welp seeing Issei being not cared about ruined this story for me. Next time you do a crossover, atleast do some research.

When a 15 year old edgelord wannabe kid wants to write a fanfic. And this is the result. Jesus, what the hell. You have no information about both anime and don't even know what you are writing.

Oooww.. shit.. He kiss her.. Aw. . Awww..
I'm curious now..
Wanna Moore... Please

I can deal with the Grammer at least you gave a warning

I love it, just wanted to point out that Aura actually called Momonga by his correct name, but then changed it to Ainz in the next instant. Small little typo I saw that made me chuckle a bit. Sasuga Ainz-sama!

Hey mr edgy.

I feel that you should have left Rais’s personality the same as canon, then slowly have her change to whatever you feel, it would have made for great character development.

Nice work I look forward to more

Amazing chapter!
I hope Ainz will have harem!

I liked the chapter!

good chap man, what took you so long.

OK for that one Guest with that awesome review about sex, I want to ask what did you smoke or drink when you wrote those? It must be felt like some piece of heaven to gave you that kind of inspiration.

Fml

Sassugasm !