i wonder how takara will react when she see corrupt merged zamasu, i also really love family zamasu black in the second ending. in the second ending does she not afraid to have s*x with zamasu or black anymore? if yes the reaction when they got caught doing 'it' by their children XD. i'm sorry if i review so much it's because i really love it

Really good! Both endings are actually magnificent, neither super light or dark and not polarized like most people do- well done!

I wouldn't mind seeing a little more with this ending, maybe some time to see Black become a big old softie to his daughter! Also not all that dark considering what happened to make this come about, I feel for Takara though, she must have days were she locks herself in a room and just scream cries.

Nice.

also i love the bonus part for the first ending~ i still wondering if takara would be jealous if she see bulma 'distracted' zamasu in the next ending, that would be hilarious XD

I'm squealing! beautiful twinsthank you.

Great ending for the first part! I look forward to the second.

what if in the next ending takara saw bulma distracting zamasu got jealous?

You did an awesome job I can't wait to read the next one.

Why couldn't Zamasu be the baby daddy

i agree with the namine, hope we get to see shinjin babies in the next ending or twins. i'm really sorry i just really love twins, just imagine the reactions

Well, I'm genuinely surprised by the first ending. Zamasu's reaction to Black was nice and how you had Zamasu kill him was great, after all with Zamasu being the weaker he would have to catch him by surprise. Its sad that we didn't get to see a Shinji baby, fingers crossed we get to see one next ending, that said Kari was very cute!

Surprised we didn't have anyone mention the fact that genetically Goku's the dad lol! I remember when Takara mention she would have to apologize to Chi-Chi after she accidentally kissed Black lol!

i'm squealing! papa zamasu is so cute, thank you so much for this chapter. can't wait for the other ending. i really love yandere zamasu

Exciting chapter, more please!

Hope you update soon