Hell of a story looking forward to the next chapter

Will part two be coming in the near future? There is so much originality to this story I'd love to see continued.

Y'know, It just hit me that Hiccup is pretty much the perfect pirate here. He has an accent, a dangerous weapon, (toothless) and a ship, and he's missing an eye, which is pirate classic. If he had lost his leg in the Red Death's fire/destruction, and was a bit wider, he would be picture

Was reading reviews to know if I should read this story. Wassa has nothing to complain about. When books/movies are realeased, they are always complete (obviously lol), but they dont always specify if it's part of a series of a stand-alone. This part is completed thus should be marked completed.

Put that it's part one in the summary. You have no idea how much this annoys readers that you don't tell this to them up front. They go through a story that's comparable to a novel(between50-100 thousand words), and don't find out until the end that it's only part one. It says it's completed, so at least have the courtesy to tell them up front that this is part one of a planned series. As it is I may not come back just, because of how much this has soured me to your stories.

Thanks,
Warryn.

Awesome chapter. I wonder which lands will the two visit? Egypt, Arabia, Ethiopia, India, China? Will they find new friends or only more enemies (who see them as demons)? Please update soon.

I freaking love this. Can't wait for part 2!

"This is a totally different version." At least that much is true. The problem is the main characters-i.e. Hiccup and Astrid are so OOC as to be "Hiccup" and "Astrid" in name only. You really should get the know the character you are "borrowing" and presuming to write about.

Poop we have to wait for part 2 it was just so d*** good I hope to read more soon

wow hiccup has declared astrid will die by his hand that should be epic.

will he do it away from berk or will he want an audience and murder astrid in front of berk?
then curse them all to hell?

Methinks Hiccup may just feed Astrid her axe the next time they meet...

CB73

Astrid? - wouldn't declare revenge against Astrid?

Well, this feels like a bit of an abrupt end to the saga, but I am pleased to see that Hiccup's growing a spine. His anger might turn out to be short-lived, however, given that the tail-fin is fixable and neither of them have been maimed for life by her - however Astrid is a giant inconvenience and is very dangerous, and getting her out of the way (either dragging her back to Berk and letting Stoick handle it or killing or maiming her personally) is a top priority if Hiccup wants to stay competitive in the archipelago.

Luck - in this case you, the author, is not on his side at the moment, and it's virtually guaranteed that he's going to run into her again, maybe with the tail-fin not 100% fixed. In that case Toothless would be very justified in blasting her away (from his point of view), and I wouldn't be too sad about it.

Cheers!

Hiccups angry now, thx for the update!

wow astrid damaged toothless tail fin will hiccup seek revenge?

Awesome chapter. Very fascinating and much action. Partly very nervwracking. Will Hiccup and Toothless escape to their island? Will they travel through the world? Please update soon.