is the barber's name Edward?

When you see the author called a character "cute"
Me: Calm down son, it just art.

I was a little scared that this chapter will be like the last 2 but its a good chapter just do a good end if you think this story has to End .

HOLY SMOKES THATS GOOD!

That confession is the smoothest thing I've seen any version of Deal do

Not sure if you did it on purpose but Monoma is the docuche from 1-B and you left out Mineta.

This is a very good story. A few things you should do is try to slow it down. If you slow it down then try to describe the environment, people, places, and the situation. Overall it is a good story and I think you should continue. And come read my story, Melody of the Heart. Let me know what you think of it.

Overall this is a good story. But there are a few things you should do going forward.
1.) Start taking things a little slower. Make it more descriptive and try to make the story have more of a love connection.
2.) I am kinda being a hypocrite because my story is going fast but I needed to set the stage for me to get descriptive.
3.) Read my story and write a review!

First person is probably the worst point of view to write fanfiction in.

Hey, just so you know, I was planning on doing the exact same crossover. So I'll make sure to read yours while I'm writing mine to make sure there is no copywrite involved. I'll pm you when mine comes out so you can do the same. Glad to know I wasn't the only one who had this idea!

Love this story, seeing how you improved izuku way a head of the canon timeline. Plus it’s great to read a izuku x Jirou story, there aren’t that much stories of this ship out there

Great chapter!

Very well written

Looking forward to seeing more

Take your time

YAS! NEW CHAPTER SOON!

Honestly, this is terrible. From what I can tell, absolutely nothing is changed from canon episodes 1-3 and yet, he gets Full Cowl instantly?! I call bullshit. It took canon Midoriya til after the Sports Festival to get Full Cowl of 5%. Absolutely bullshit.