Fuck iruka

omg yes! so. so. so cute! i am so so excited for more!

im gonna make a tenten fic too but she'll have the Gamer System

Great stuff up until now~

Well I don't know where the EF this is going but holy hell its entertaining

Aww man, if you’re giving us updates like this, no way we’re mad. Iruka is such a cutie pie! And man, Tenten is so snarky... I love it! And now Iruka will have someone to rely on... with how the ninjas handled the kids, no wonder most of the end skrewed. They really should invest on therapists.

I love this so fucking much, I hope you continue to update.

I'm just sharing my analysis of the ending of this chapter. Please don't take it the wrong way.

She's around 1-2 years old now right? The way she talked to that shinobi who came to take Iruka was randomly angry/adult/aggressive. She's a baby and she commanded a ninja, who had just survived a devastating attack, as if he's some idiot soldier. Obeying an angry two year old is completely unlike a ninja. No matter how loud she is and how much she cusses, he's a hardened soldier and shouldn't be swayed by the commands of a child. A few sentences ago, all Iruka and Tenten did was share their names. There was little to no indication that they bonded. She just decided for her parents that they are going to take in another child. That's a huge a responsibility to put on someone else and not one I'd think most adults would be comfortable with just after everything they've had was destroyed. Iruka himself should be weirded out by both Tenten's mature language and her sudden aggressive need to keep him with her. Iruka should be old enough to be her teacher one day.

Please update when you can.

Listen um... I am going to need you to update please, because it is getting GOOD. You don't find to many Tenten stories like this and that's saying something, because there is not at lot of Tenten stories. So can you please update this for me and maybe, just maybe finish it please!

This is a great fanfic. Please continue this. It would be such a great series of fanfiction.

The way how Hizashi is worried about her it’s cute, and kinda tragic in the same way if you know why he thinks like that.

In a different way, Ten-chan make the two cland interact, how genius.

i loooooooove this fic i hope to read a new chapter soon, please?

If she read so much fan fiction then why doesn’t she use the utterly broken cheats some of the characters in those fics have utilized? Hell, there’s some fics where the main OC uses sealing to do hand seals for them or absorb nature chakra. A real SI would use all the hax at their disposal.

good work just read it all in one shot