| Reviews for A Will to Shatter Stars |
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   zigmas chapter 8 . 7/17 Weird ending is weird. |
| Zeromaru Chaos Mode chapter 1 . 1/21 Not-Greg uses Taunt! Enemy Leviathan fell for the taunt! |
| tronax22 chapter 1 . 11/12/2019 "Just in time for a Ford truck come crashing into the being at speed of light." I'm not sure just how bad this would be for the planet. But absolutely best case scenario would be only part of Earth completely destroyed, and enough left for a new Ice Age. But honestly, I wouldn't bet on it. My money is on a brand new meteorite belt. Good news? Endbringer would probably end up rapidly escaping the solar system. So, yay. Good job. |
| NazgulBelserion chapter 8 . 10/1/2019 This was so cool smh wanted more |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2019 Please get a proofreader, there are so many typos and mangled sentences (often with missing words, making them incomplete), and things that are just weirdly phrased, I'm guessing English isn't your native language? A proofreader can help with all of that, I honestly couldn't get past the first chapter. |
| Cheshirek3t chapter 8 . 7/20/2019 ... nice |
| Cheshirek3t chapter 3 . 7/20/2019 Eidolon crackled in my mind and words came. Leviathan Hitman Services. We 'wash away' your problems! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAGAGAHAHAHAHAHDHSHAHDHASYEHASHDHAGAUDAUAUAYAYAHAHANA7AFABAAUAY OHHOHOHO OH OH MY SIDES, THEY HURT HEHEHEHE hehehe hehe heh... phew, boy, i needed that That was not what really happened, but its close, there are people sleeping here and silent laughs can sometimes be painful... totally worth it tho |
| YeTianshi chapter 7 . 7/9/2019 Outplayed... 6 known Endbringers, three currently active, and I don't remember how many more inactive. But which ones can he control? |
| YeTianshi chapter 4 . 7/9/2019 He doesn't really think they're Ubert and Leet right? I really hope he's kidding. |
| YeTianshi chapter 3 . 7/9/2019 Contessa? |
| YeTianshi chapter 1 . 7/9/2019 It looks pretty nice so far. Though at this point I am just really curious how our MC will be interacting with the cast, his interactions with Dragon are already pretty nice, I can't wait until he talks to Taylor, Lisa, Alexandria and some others xD |
| KRPrime chapter 8 . 7/9/2019 Yeah an Confusing end but hay at least you plan on rewriting it than dropping the whole story so good for you. |
| Guesty chapter 8 . 6/25/2019 Anyone else confused? |
| Chooser chapter 8 . 6/21/2019 I quite enjoyed this. I would've liked it if there was more "You! Fuck off!" jokes, because that one made me really laugh. |
| Ending Ender chapter 8 . 6/14/2019 The ending sucked. The rest of it was fun, but this ending just blows. |
