Reviews for While in Satan City
Nadesko chapter 5 . 3/21
I m so glad to read you again! Thanks for update! This is going a very interesting way, i hope update soon!
Nadesko chapter 4 . 5/30/2019
Oh, nooo... How I dont read this before!
This is a jewel... And, some how, i fell in love with Goku and Chichi, such a very good characters! This Goku is absolutley amazing and i reealy hope you update soon.
Going to Favorite Story list!
CieMackey9697 chapter 4 . 3/28/2019
So many words unsaid, yet understood. I can't tell you enough, how much I love this fic! It brings me immense happiness. Twists me up real good.

I definitely agree that if Chi-Chi hadn’t left than her and Goku may have definitely ended up together.

Which makes the need to know why Chi-Chi so much stronger lol
CieMackey9697 chapter 3 . 3/28/2019
Aw, so their going to pretend the kiss never happened? That makes me sad. But I guess it makes sense considering Chi-Chi’s explanation of Phoniex Mist.

Is Chi-Chi a drug dealer? Lol
CieMackey9697 chapter 2 . 3/28/2019
Chi-Chi to the rescue! And she gets rewarded with a kiss! ;)

I really like your writing! I can see it all so clearly the way you describe everything! Can't wait to see what else happens between Goku and Chi-Chi. I'm so excited!
Lala chapter 4 . 3/28/2019
Not going to lie, I am a sucker for platonic intimacy. This chapter just solidified for me that Goku and Chi-Chi were a lot closer than Goku’s perspective in the first chapter led us to believe.

A suppression of feelings, perhaps?
Lala chapter 3 . 3/28/2019
Soo, it was the drugs…I’m like Goku, I’m not completely sold on that. Chi-Chi sure seems to know a lot about this stuff, I cannot wait until the story dives into what exactly she has been doing this past couple of years. I think the three things I’m most looking for to are:

1. Goku and Chi-Chi’s past interaction
2. An actual dialogue between Suno and Goku(surprisingly considering I’m a major Gochi shipper)
3. CHI-CHI’S PAST

keep the chapters coming my friend.
Lala chapter 2 . 3/28/2019
Wow. I’m not sure what Goku’s got going but he needs to figure it out. Also, am I wrong for giggling at Chi-Chi having to knock out a prostitute to keep her from taking advantage of Goku.
roku1397 chapter 4 . 3/27/2019
Goku and Chichi are too close to be deemed as friends only.
Their relationship has the potential to become more than what they are ; if Chichi didn't leave .

They are more than friends yet less than lovers...
Nicole Bro chapter 3 . 3/25/2019
I’ve just reread the chapters you have posted and I’m very eager to see how this story progresses. I love you depiction of Chi-Chi and the sort of forbidden love aspect of the story. The portrayal of Goku’s confusion and attempt to fight his feels is very well written. Eagerly awaiting your next update. Happy writing.
foxsqueen chapter 3 . 1/27/2019
Damn i want to know more about chichi's past
roku1397 chapter 3 . 1/2/2019
I really like this cool Chichi. I am more intrigued to what she has become.

I'd love to see their history soon...
foxsqueen chapter 2 . 11/27/2018
Ho, great timing Chi, that girl had the whole intention to be shady with him. So he does did it! He kissed her, lets see how he will react
tiramisusu chapter 2 . 11/5/2018
If you ever decide to continue, please please PLEASE write more steamy hot GoChi makeout scenes. I kept rereading it 'cause I loved it that much.
26Chapters chapter 2 . 10/29/2018
And Goku went and did that. I was really hoping that he wouldn't. It seems like they have history too, and now I will never learn of that history.
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