Well, well, Li'l Lily~

Hoo-rrah! 1st Review, Btches~!

Ohhh my goodness~ Wow~! *O* Oh my goodness! Fiona-hime-sama and Helena-sama! *O*

Fiona already has Helena-sama's protegé in her loving embrace, and now, Helena-sama~has Fiona-hime-sama in her~loving, passionate embrace!

Wow~ Like, wow, this was soooo~friggin' hot! This was so~hot, it kicked off immediately with dat barrage of passion and...wow~ Fiona-hime-sama in her iconic outfit...and Helena-sama in a bling~bling sling bikini~?! *O*

The levels of upper social echelons are off the chart~! XD A Princess and an Aristocrat. Wow~ Sooo much elegance and grace and high class~

Fantastic work, Yuri-chan~! Kasumi, Ayane, you're next! Ninja Half-Sisters Package deal, baaaaaby!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Good thoughts from Fiona on finding her prince, then a good bit of conflict from Marie regarding her and Honoka.

Proofing finds-
"Prince Charming".
(flailing) her arms.
(an) elegant giggle.
for (however) long

Fun transition to them getting along. And Honoka showing up of all people! Cute end w/her carrying Marie. :)

Interesting- didn't know there was an update w/new characters. Been a DOA fan since the beginning.
Good character description for Fiona, including her thoughts. Nice bit of conflict with resisting Nyo and dealing with the swimsuit problem.

I liked the water dance; well-written! Honoka's mimicry power comes in handy for that. :) A sweet scene for Fiona w/two very different ladies: Nyo and Honoka. Well done!

Well, well, Li'l Lily~

Hoo-rrah! 1st Review, Btches~!

It's a pleasure, Yuri-chan~ Seriously, it really, really is! :D It's like a domino effect~ One maiden "falls", the others will follow suit~! XD The maidens of "Dead or Alive" are a tight-knit bunch, fo' shu!

And awwwww, Marie~ Marie~ Oh Marie Rose, the Little Imp~ She got aaaalll jelly~ LOL Poor, poor dear~ Fiona-hime-sama "took away" Honks and now she wants in~

This was friggin' adowable~ From Fiona-hime-sama and her fantasies, to Marie Rose "confronting" her and then, dat embrace, ohhh dat sweet, tender, precious embrace~ *W* And dat ending? Wow~ Fiona-hime-sama is a princess, but she~carries Marie Rose princess-style! (Heart)

You're welcome, Yuri-chan~! Great work! *O* Helena-sama, you're next!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Well, well, Li'l Lily~

HOO-RRAH! 1st Review EVAR, Btches~!

Ok, first off: welcome to "Dead or Alive", Fiona-hime-sama~! *O*

Second: Nyo-sama, you animal!

Third: Fiona is sooo~gorgeous and sooo~cute and soooo~sekshi in dat swimsuit Nyo-sama picked out for her and just...ohhhh dem watery shenanigans, dat sheer love and affection, grace and elegance and beauty in the water~ *O*

Honks and Nyo-sama~ Wow, they had it so~bad for Fiona, eh? Well, I don't blame them one single bit~ *O* Dem confessions, dem kisses, dem 'kinis, dat love in the purity of water~

Thus, Fiona's harem of loving, willing concubines has begun to form~ Two down, who knows how many to go~? ;D Who's next~?!

Mission Start! Let Fiona-hime-sama's conquest begin! 8D

Semper-Fi! Carry on!