Reviews for Hectic
NateLawyer21 chapter 1 . 4/19
Absolutely loving this story! I pray you'll be able to keep updating, whenever your stressed mind allows you too! I pray this lockdown situation doesn't have too much of an adverse effect on your health
Breathlessmoments chapter 18 . 4/18
I love this!
CajunBear73 chapter 18 . 4/18
The bits and pieces of this expansive relationship are falling into place...

The 'sleepover' the parents had was a bit different than children can imagine, but that's for another day and time...

Duties with the children and themselves are being established, but I think Astrid got the better deal when she cleaned the kitchen and Hiccup had to deal with syrup-coated children to get bathed...

Promises of continued gatherings and sleepovers dancing in all their heads, they start on their new days and weeks.

CB73
Redboat chapter 18 . 4/17
They're going to be the adorable cute blended family aren't they? Good chapter.
ShipMistress chapter 18 . 4/17
D'aww, this was perfect! All the fluff I needed from this little family, so sweet. I loved how the girls occupied Hiccup as a more or less comfy sofa. :D
And yeah, I guess the grown-ups had a fun sleepover, too. O:)
Thank you so much once more for writing this, it was lovely and a perfect way to end yet another week.
Vivi-ntvg chapter 18 . 4/17
Hehe. I bet they did. :P
RyuSensei chapter 17 . 4/6
Really sweet story! Glad the kids take it so well, it's not always easy to accept a potential step parent. I know I never acceptedmy stepmom because she is a nasty piece of work xD
HeadintheCloudsRealist chapter 17 . 3/11
So sweet and fluffy, cotton candy for the eyes. I enjoy your pacing. Their relationship isn't rushed which is more realistic. They fit so well together. It's so refreshing to see drama free exes. Normally it's new lover against ex and jealousy. It's nice to see that they just focus on what's best for their children and themselves.
Also Mala carrying to term for him. Whoa. That's so insane. I mean normally men are assumed to not be providers, which is toxic. I freaking love that you made him speak up about his wants though he would've understood if she didn't. I personally know a situation like this but it ended badly. It takes a lot to raise a child and also to not raise one. I admit, few years ago I would've found Mala to be cold and hateful because who wouldn't want their child? Now as a parent, I realize that it's not for everyone and it's better for the child if they have someone who truly wants to raise them instead of it being forced. I do like that she tries to be involved.
You capture the children pretty well. Reminds me of the extroverts next door to me. Frozen is the rage all over. Though I must admit, I don't see it as a kids film anymore after seeing a certain ship so blatantly in it. Lol. I'm horrible hahaha.
As always, you capture Hiccstrid's chemistry perfectly. Gosh, I just word vomited. Yikes.
TL;DR Refreshing cotton candy for the eyes
Guest chapter 17 . 3/11
Fantastic as always. Can't wait for more
I-R-SMARTEST chapter 17 . 3/10
plse update soon I absolutely love this story
Guest chapter 17 . 3/3
Next one pls, dont neglect it!
ShipMistress chapter 17 . 3/3
WARNING!
CUTENESS OVERLOAD!

Ahh, this was so cute, so easy and simple, I love it! :) Yeah, scheduling their time around shared custody will always be a point, but they click so naturally. I'm just over here, barely awake yet but grinning from ear to ear. Thank you! :D
Vivi-ntvg chapter 17 . 3/3
This was cute, though I do hope they don't get any interruptions in the middle of the night... Or maybe I do hope so because it'd be hilarious... :P
CajunBear73 chapter 17 . 3/3
A nice rhythm of life with the two families growing closer together, as domesticity seems to come so much easier as they spend time together.

Still some wrinkles with the Ex's, but not harsh, that will smooth out in time.

As this ends, there's promise of excitement and joy for more than the children who are probably going to become closer than sisters...

CB73
Darknight2124 chapter 17 . 3/3
That sounds about like hiccup
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