| Reviews for Dust, Darkness and Dark Knights |
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   foruwaner chapter 2 . 7/4 Nice work |
| foruwaner chapter 1 . 7/4 Undead they not need to eat |
| Converge chapter 22 . 6/6 You made his faith stat waaaaaaay higher than strength AND endurance COMBINED. But now, he’s much more physically strong than he is spiritually. I understand trying to nurf him so the conflict is engaging, but please be consistent. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/27 Calling it now Salem is Priscilla |
| Firefang099 chapter 10 . 3/22 Kinda late, but I should point out that purpose/goals/beliefs are what also keeps the undead from hollowing. |
| Axccel chapter 21 . 2/7 Actually, they won not due to Dark Souls, but because you decided to make Miracles require a short speech and to not include Sorceries and to have him hardly use Pyromancy and use it poorly when he did use any. Not because of ignorance. While I like the fight itself, the reason for his loss is nonsensical for the aforementioned reasons. I can think of several ways he would have effortlessly wiped them out. Not wasting time talking instead of casting is one of them. |
| Achilles333 chapter 26 . 2/4 I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. Your writing style is elegant with little to no mistakes to mention. The fact that you have a main character interact mainly with someone other than team RWBY is impressive to me, even just because of the thought that has to be put into writing the lesser used characters. I sincerely hope you continue this fic. It's one of the best I've read in a long time, if not ever, and one I want to see completed. |
| Not Thanos chapter 7 . 12/21/2019 "Reality is often disappointing." Thanos-approved. |
| Huh chapter 1 . 12/6/2019 Beef? I have not eaten beef for over 66 million years! |
| SebjectCrimsonStorm chapter 17 . 11/2/2019 Well, I see unexpected love blooming, and that kind of love is the most enjoyable to read honestly |
| Wraith048 chapter 2 . 10/21/2019 \[TPRAISE THE SUN! |
| dragoon109 chapter 13 . 9/14/2019 jaune is strong we see it in the show. Also wiess is better as a leader since she would actually lead her team, help them get stronger. As for Arcos, i never liked how pyrah tried to help jaune. That is not how a partner helps. |
| dragoon109 chapter 10 . 9/14/2019 where is jaune arc? |
| WolfyFenri chapter 26 . 9/7/2019 Really enjoyable story. I wonder why I had avoided it for so long. Btw, I love your Glynda. Like, really like her. It's just one chapter since her last appearance but I already miss her. Well, all in all, this story exceed my expectations. And I love it. Thank you very much, Author. Please keep writing. |
| Lt.Frostdromeda chapter 26 . 8/28/2019 Must be nice to have your own Silver Knight army and not get shot down off a walkway |
