Reviews for Time Goes By |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story love the idea of them knowing about there passed lives. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Each chapter is so nice to read. Great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO! I Headcannon a few things about RWBY. One of my weirder ones is that the Overwatch and TF2 Universes are linked to the RWBYverse. In it, Reinhardt is Nora's "Grampy", and Coco's Uncle is the Heavy. Now, when you said about the Magical Girls, I thought of my HC and that everyone in the Universe is one. "Tell Uncle Heavy he is prettiest princess, масло какао!" "Uncle, you're embarrassing me in front of m-" "NOW!" |
![]() ![]() This feels like kin memories |
![]() ![]() ![]() could swear i read a whitrose story like this before... either way good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey DASM, contrary to popular belief, I'm not dead. Although life IS slowly killing me. :P I like the concept you're going with for the overarching narrative,and the flashbacks are fun to read. I would like to see more meat to those flashbacks, but I understand that they are part of a writing challenge, and need to be kept short due to time constraints. Perhaps, if you continue with this story after the challenge ends, you could eventually revisit them with Ruby wanting to know more about the time when they were X & Y. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay this is cute, *chuckles* I mean the start seems a touch rushed but its adorable and I love the interactions...and honestly I could see Ruby being rather accepting of the whole 'previous lives' thing. She's a fairly open minded character |
![]() ![]() ![]() DOOT. I like the idea of the reincarnation soulmate thing and that it takes place it a kinda-normal version of RWBY but the second one is why i can't read this. I don't like RWBY being normal but that doesn't mean i didn't like the first chapter. I can tell it's good and i would have loved to read it more if it wasn't nornal. Still write tho, other like this and im just not the type to read this. Sincerely, Spooky Scary Saber |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this story keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cute, I always love my fair share of ladybug stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this! I can’t wait for more! Keep up the great work my friend |
![]() ![]() ![]() huh. |