Reviews for Heir of Eden
Hades Darkstar chapter 8 . 7/12
I think you should look at the reviews again, from what I saw, a lot of people like your story, the way you depicted Issei, and wish for you to continue. I will agree with some of them that Ddraig possessing Issei should not have been the reason for Issei almost raping a girl. In my own opinion, you should have gone with Issei letting the power to boost his strength high above human levels go to his head and with encouragement and persuasion from his more perverted friends, was willing to cross the line and take what he wants to start becoming a Harem King. What those who like Issei need to remember is that Issei did not start changing until the Raynare incident, and even then he was still extremely perverted for a long while. What I hope you remember Lord Vidar is that you can't please everyone, and that there is always going to be someone who will put flack on you about something. As long as a lot of people like your story then you should continue if the people don't like it than they shouldn't read it.
Mari Wollsch chapter 9 . 7/4
super great, please continu this story, why did you mark complete? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
gage.tooman chapter 9 . 6/10
Please continue this story I love it and I need more!
Spidey1617 chapter 9 . 5/11
u shouldn't let anyone dictate your stories if they don't like how u portray a character then they can just stop reading the story. I wish u would continue this story cause I like it and I'm sorry issei was a massive pervert in the manga and anime he might of Mellowed out later on in the manga and anime but he still a pervert.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/10
I don’t know what others have been telling you, but I honestly like this version better. Sure it needs work but I would love to see you continue it. I honestly love what you are doing to the perv and i rarely see anyone who do a change that way. Please keep up the good work
TOWTWUKER chapter 9 . 5/8
Anyone giving you flack about issei should shove their heads back into the hole they pulled it out of. Cannon pricks...
georgiaboy chapter 9 . 5/8
I think you portrayed Issei and his 2 Amigo's just the way they are. I have never met an open portraying pervert as a nice person. A pervert who does not want to chase away their pray and stay away from the cops, will not be open about it.

And for those that will decry what I said. I spent time in jail as a guest of the special units people in protected lockup, and you could tell which were redeemable, soso, and unredeemable. Then I got lumped into the group therapy unit with them, which was like AA. But hearing some of the guys stories, just made me sick.
Animemangalover24 chapter 9 . 5/8
I'm sorry but I like this story better than your other one , and i feel like you just gave up on this story. I thought this story was unique and a far cry better than the other harry potter crossover with high school DxD. Also this is fanfiction if you want to portray issei a certain way then by all means make him that way it's called FanFiction for a Reason! So what if people don't like the way you make him as long as it fits in your story and goes how you want it to it shouldn't matter what they think. If they don't like it then shouldn't read it.
WingGrazer chapter 9 . 5/8
I think this one has way more potential then your other story you mentioned
alucard84 chapter 9 . 5/8
To bad ur stipping this i quite enjoyed it
Hades Darkstar chapter 9 . 5/8
I think you should continue this story. When I see how you depicted Issei and what happened to him, my first thought was serves him right. I really like this story and hope to see you continuing it.
HP-DG-SB-NR-RG-PN chapter 9 . 5/8
I honestly think that whoever is giving you flak over Issei should shut the hell up. He's such a worthless character that it's stunning that he's been made a Main Character for that series. I haven't seen such a useless character, ever.
Pushi19 chapter 9 . 5/7
I like this story better the keeper of key
dingo-822 chapter 9 . 5/7
Hell no, don't stop I prefer this story over that. That story isn't bad but the way it reads is that wizards are only there to increase the other factions forces whether they like it or not. This one reads better.

Also, about the way you depicted Issei what people seem to forget was that him getting killed was what really started his change, yes he was a nice guy but he was clueless which kept him somewhat grounded. Since he had awakened his Boosted Gear early and still hung around his perverted friends it is very possible for him to turn out the way you wrote with some peer pressure and some power-boosting his ego.
Louis XII chapter 8 . 4/2
it was shit imo!

why and above all by what right does Harry allow himself to remove Issei's sacred gear when he is NOT responsible for his actions because he is possessed?
what Harry should have done is for Issei's safety is to remove the Boosted Gear and return it to Issei later, once Issei has learned to control it.

and why have you distorted the perverted duo and Ddraig specially to suit your own needs?

Ddraig who goes off on the rampage and suddenly begins ...to rape a girl! OxO
I want to vomit! probably a poorly and lame excuse for bash Issei?
we must not have the same idea of "rampage", for me Ddraig who would go rampage it would rather be "Godzilla style"

this scene was trash, disgusting and forced because NEITHER Draig or a member of Perverted Trio would rape a girl!
Draig specially! I am ashamed that you have twisted this poor Draig who didn't deserve such treatment!

Draig is a noble beast, one of the two HEAVENLY Dragons with Albion?
Would Albion do such a thing?
no because Vali isn't a pervert! but we are relentless on Issei because of his perversion!

horribly forced and useless. why are the authors unable to write Issei's character properly without the bash him?

bash fics are trahs fics
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