Reviews for Hell upon the League
gemm1mt chapter 19 . 7/13
Awesome man, please continue.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/23
Hey guest how about you shut your fuck’n mouth beside he creates story and what do you do nothing that’s what your doing so get your bulltshit out of here
diazr9999 chapter 19 . 4/30
Hope you can update soon I really curious how these spawn is and hope he joins with Alvin and don’t bother reading those haters reviews
ShowWatcherWriter chapter 9 . 3/14
This just might be the worst story I've ever read. Why would you ruin so many characters, stories and the entire DC universe?
ShowWatcherWriter chapter 9 . 3/14
Okay this has to be the dumbest story I'veread by far! I mean what were you on when you thought this was a good idea?

You say that the shitty protagonist has never had any luck with women now he's a chick magnet?! And that's another thing, what self-respecting woman would say any of the stupid crap you made Diana, Lois and I'm pretty sure every women you write say.

News flash dumbass, not every woman is a slutty whore who just thinks about sex all the time, have you even interacted with one?!

And why would someone like Superman, SUPERMAN!, be so weak? You know he's not, everyone knows he's not! If Superman is a character that is debated against someone like Goku all the time, fought Darkseid and Doomsday, can survive residing in the sun and move planets then he's not weak! He even stated that he holds back all the time because when he doesn't then the world is basically cardboard to him.

But don't get me started on Batman. The world's greatest detective, the man who knows every and any martial art and the man who has fought Spawn before just charges in like an idiot without even strategizing?

And the fact you're bashing on every male character in the book besides gay boyfriend Sean whatever the fuck face he is, just says a lot about your character. Not everyone is shit compared to your character because you say so, this may be fan fiction but have a sense or realism to that fiction.

I'm not against you, yes I know you want to be Alvin Satan (Dumbest name ever written), having a harem but don't go after every woman in the universe. What are you gonna do when they have kids? You can't possibly tell me that after all your horny fantasy's are fuffifled, which may be never, they won't get pregnant?

And seriously work on your grammar, you're in your 20's even 5 year olds form better sentences than your mistake of a story.

Sigh...look your concept for the story is actually pretty good but please fix all of it. Don't make your OP character so unlikable, if the character is OP then find a good way to write the story based around that. Look at One Punch Man, that Anime does it perfectly. Research your characters, and know more about them at least and stop bashing. It's not helping anyone besides stroking your ego, check the grammar and form the sentences. English isn't hard. Respect women and know that having a Harme doesn't make them your toys or slaves, they're still people and what you wrote was disgusting. Stop focusing on Lemon and write the damn story, integrate the girls logically and properly.

Even after this rant, I really have faith in you and your stories. Read this review or just ignore it and focus on the "Good Jobs!". I'm just saying that will not help you as an author.

Overall good concept, bad story, Fuck Sean (And not in a sexual way, he's literally as bad as Joffrey from Game of Thrones), give your character well...character and good luck.

Btw: Get rid of the Spawn sword, it's not helping anyone.
ShowWatcherWriter chapter 7 . 3/13
So uhh...why is Batman and Superman getting so much hate? Actually is everyone getting bashed while Mr. Main Character A.K.A Cardboard man, is getting praised for showing a corpse on T.V where kids are watching?
Darkprince092994 chapter 18 . 3/7
Iv got to ask is there a possibility that you would bring Mortal Kombat characters into your story or are you going to keep it strictly comic book based.
Guest chapter 19 . 3/4
Next chapter please
AnimeGoji91 chapter 19 . 12/26/2019
Who this character in this story and please continues this story please!?
Darac chapter 5 . 12/27/2019
this bff shit is stupid rly ffs am droping this
Darac chapter 3 . 12/27/2019
omg i died a lil inside what did i just read fck man
Ryu Otsutsuki chapter 19 . 12/26/2019
Merry Christmas brother and awesome chapter I love it
Spiral-Voltron-Zero0Q1 chapter 19 . 12/24/2019
Awesome stuff man
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 19 . 12/24/2019
Awesome chapter! Loved this! I can only wonder who the person at the end was though? Another Hellspawn maybe? But one that’s not a part of the Legion? Hmm...
Shadowdragondanny chapter 19 . 12/24/2019
Love it can’t wait for more
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