Lovely chapter, can't wait to see what else these kids Will have to endure. Good work.

Some very interesting revelations in this chapter, I'm eager to learn more about the backstory you crafted. And kudos to you for actually sticking to the (surprise) incest between Arthur and Morgan - it's a part of the story I personally feel a bit iffy towards, but it is canon in most versions, so it makes sense to come into play here too.

Very interesting chapter, i'm more and more curious to know what happened to Guinevre and the other Knights of the round table.

Great to see that you pulled through with Alexandra's powers going haywire. I think you conveyed her desperation very nicely, especially with that flashback. (I had a hunch that you would give her a brother with the name Tristan, so I was very happy to see that play out.)
I'm curious how things will evolve now that the Sins have found out the truth…
Also, don't be so hard on your action scenes. If you aren't super into the physics and mechanics of physical (or magical, I guess) combat, you can focus on how the confusion of battle makes these characters feel and end up with just as strong of a scene.

And thanks for the shout-out - just don't say that my version is better. It's different, sure, but that's because my focal point lies elsewhere. Best way I can describe it is that you want to share ideas, whereas I'm just happy to play around with words a lot. And of course, your story is fast-paced and mine is a hopeless slow-burn. In the end, its a question of personal preference not quality.

Absolutely epic, Alex's breakdown felt just like his father's wrath in canon. Can't wait for more.

Wise uncle Helbram is my life now.
Seriously, the fact that you brought him and Gerheade into this story is amazing and unexpected in the best way. I'm kind of jealous of your ability to cover so much ground within a single chapter, whereas I am stuck as a hopeless over-writer. Looking forward to the next update!

Beatiful introspection

I'm afraid of whats going to happen... Cant wait for the next chapter!

Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy!

Interesting, curious to see how the next battles will change now that families are starting to grow more. Good work.

Is he trying to say that Mercy made him do all of this? Or at least the killing her family part?

You know... I HAD the same idea of yours on using the 4 hourseman of the apocalypse, and also making the Arthurian legend more relevant that the main series didn’t wanted to. I’m glad that someone is still following that trope!

Interesting

I am so thrilled that you pulled through with returning to this story - the way you slowly build a picture of the new characters and their pasts is super intriguing, and it was what drew me to this fic in the first place.
And it's also interesting to see where your ideas diverge from mine, I'll admit.
Also thanks for calling me out in your opening! I still need some time to polish my early chapters but it will definitely happen.
Can't wait for the next update, and keep up the good work!

I've still some problem into remembering all the relationship with chapter and fights need improving, but good job no less, the plot seems to grow further and i can't wait to see how the Sins will react. Curious to see if Elizabeth's full power and memories will also be awakened earlier. Keep up the good work and see you soon.

I was wondering if you plan on ever continuing this story. It has actually inspired me to write something with the same premise (that something is already 200 pages long), and I wanted to ask more or less officially if you would mind me posting it eventually. Of course, I would mention you as my source of inspiration.