Please update this

that's what u get for going Turbo! hahaha! sucks to be her!

I hope you update this :)

I can’t wait for more chapters!

I like this. Unlike the other guest I think Vanellope has no excuse for leaving. The other racers were not in control of themselves and if she's this big leader she tries to brag about she should have acted like one and actually treated the racers like respect as she wanted. Her leaving only shows she doesn't care about anyone Ralph included. She has no excuse to leave Sugar Rush, especially when it was revealed the racers were being mind controlled themselves and if she did leave, she shouldn't expect them to just wait for her and praise her on her return. Like everyone else, her actions have consequences and she is seeing them. Even with her past experiences she is not protected and she has to deal with all the bad stuff that comes with her as everyone else. No excuses for her.

i would love to see more about the sugar rush racers and how their lives are bliss without vanellope.

i really like how the sugar rush racers don't want her back or really care about her. vanellope brought this on herself

There is good writing here and I understand what you're trying to do, but I feel like you're being a bit one-sided towards Vanellope. She was abused by everyone in her game for fifteen years (a really long time, a decade and a half) and you're not really covering how this has damaged her psyche and impacted her choices, especially her choice to leave Sugar Rush completely. Maybe consider that for the next chapter. Good luck with this story.

Sometimes I think people need to look deeper into the characters and realise that actions hav of consequences. Vanellope took her chances online and has irreparably screwed herself as a result, what she's DONE to Ralph? Its unacceptable, the arcade is doing much better without her and considering this is the most likely canon we will get for Vanellope, Im just disgusted with her.

Taffyta and Sugar Rush will definitely grow better under her rule since she isn't forcing shit. She's taking her time, watching, waiting, sharing, listening an then acting when necessary.

Woah, that was sad. I hope Vanellope learns what being a president actually means in the second film. Awesome work on this story

Poor vanellope, so sad