Reviews for Star Wars: Eternal Pilgrim
Nobels chapter 16 . 6/11
Jamous keeps being surprised by people walking up to him. I feel like as a force sensitive of 10000 years, that would be something to work on. In general I was hoping for a much wiser and more badass person, but I guess there's still a lot of time to change that. In particular, the way he was almost taken out feels to me like he was artificially nerfed and may need some elaboration, especially when we saw him slaughter tons of people before.
Your explanation for his emotions are fair though, and maybe you've already got plans for the other things I mentioned. Either way, I really like the idea of this story, and I'm looking forward to more.
Nobels chapter 15 . 6/11
It seems odd that over such a long time he hasn't properly confronted those thoughts properly.
alertpoet91 chapter 16 . 5/20
Jamous should have been more aware in combat because of the precog that Force users have unless I am misunderstanding something.
Fantastic Chapter! Good to see that this is not dead.
Rezan chapter 16 . 5/20
A really interesting story. Keep up the great work. Make sure to stay safe and healthy!
rainfallMyth chapter 16 . 5/20
shitty universe I get that but does practically every gangster have to try and rape every girl the mc is near? hope this changes
rainfallMyth chapter 11 . 5/20
lesson learned in quite the unfortunate way. hope that he finds love in the future. fay perhaps, considering she is like 300 years old before asajj kills her, they could relate on that level regarding long life spans
simsic chapter 15 . 5/7
i hoped it world be an epic work when i started reading this story, i am a little disapointed . but it is not too bad.
spirouFr chapter 15 . 12/11/2019
thanks for the story
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2019
Before Battle of Yavin
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 15 . 10/23/2019
"Why couldn't Jamous keep his emotions under control". Cause it seem's he is in eternal puberty, legit the guy keeps goofing up cause his IQ is not enough to control himself. TY for the chapter tho.
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 12 . 10/23/2019
And he done goofed. Apparently MC hasn't used his extensive life for common sense, when you bring stuff back to life it tend's to fuk itself up.
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 11 . 10/23/2019
Ok, the question here is A) he regrets her death or B) he will revive her and then she gonna do something stupid/bad and he will regret reviving her.
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 10 . 10/23/2019
I will be honest, love the story but Lana is being kind of annoying. Understandable, but annoying. Plus the foreshadowing only makes me more wary of her. Looking forward to reading more :)
alertpoet91 chapter 15 . 10/22/2019
Great Chapter!
FriggleBerry chapter 2 . 9/14/2019
What does B.B.Y mean in time?
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