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You do know Avalon is an ex ranked defense of noble phantasm.

Inb4 Lectra revealed to be heir of First Magic.

I might wrong but 1 did shirou and sakura have sex? Uh rin and Ilya aren't gonna be happy. 2. Did assassin tell shirou to look inside himself and understand what he wants. What is assassin's plan? Shirou is stuck in a cave with a pretty girl. So the things he could do are train and/or mate like rabbits.

Oh snaaap! Gramps is in the house and he doesn't like competition. Really cool idea to just have Sakura summon true asassin. That is some next level stuff. Though I guess in this war he isn't at full capacity as a Grand. Sorry for not reviewing earlier, got caught up with school, then binged again. Can't wait to see what's next!

RIP Reines, although she wasn't a good person; she was still a main character in the Case Files anime and seeing her die is kinda hard.

Rin went One Hundred Percent Maximum No Chill and was quickly reverted to tsundere Rin within moments!

Bazett decided it was a great idea to fight a berserker in hand to hand combat... I guess I can see why Sigurd feels the others were more competent lol.

Going strong, can see the pattern aligning.

A bit sad about the Lady El Melloi, but war is war.

Man, brutal. Both the test, and the question after. I suppose I’d prefer Saber be the one betrayed for the greater good. Seems most fitting to me somehow.

Thanks for another amazing chapter! I feel sp bad for a certain smug lady, dang shame and all that. Keep up the wonderful work!

Huh, Sakura back to the worms. Nice twist.

Oh man, Tokiomi’s probably still re-enacting “I have No Mouth and I Must Scream.” Except, well, he has a mouth. Unless it required stuff from Gil’s treasury to keep him alive.

Very interesting. I wonder where you are taking the "metal in the brain" bit.

Eh, don't be sorry, I'm quite alright with being singled out, I can even say I like it.
This chapter was quite good, even if still somewhat filled with angst. I guess the main thing I was trying to tell you last time (I kind of wasn't thinking all that straight after binging your work :)) is that in the last few chapters the tension and suffering has only been building up, and no release has been found - and I feel like this is something the readers, and I'm speaking from experience, can feel burned out on if it carries for too long.
On the other topic, after thinking about it, I think that while I love the man, Kiritsugu might have been better off dying, since I kind of disagree with the way Shirou behaves under his tutelage.
To go on.a bit of a tangent - there was this phrase that I think does a good job of describing him - "Kill the heart, Steel the mind", as it really seems to fit his current MO better and better. I believe I've heard it in one of those (at least I think there were multiple) all servants summoned are Shirou from various timelines. The phrase was used by the Rider since it helped him cope with ignoring the horrors Sakura faced every day. After all, even when the protagonist renounces his dream in Heavens Feel, he is still a man filled with compassion to others - it is just that Sakura became even more important to him than that. Here though, with how that the thought of killing another comes to the man easier and easier each time, it feels like he sacrifices his love for fellow human beings, however much of it he had for the beginning, even more each time.

I don't know what I have to say anymore about this. I've been a silent reader of this story up until now cause I feel you did a disservice to the characters you're trying to portay without reading up and understanding them completely. Murdering characters left and right as tools to continue the plot isn't good storytelling especially when the build up was minimal and tasteless.

I can't recommend continuing this story as I can already see how it will play out from other similar takes. It's honestly disappointing as everything up until you decided to end the Blade persona arc had been refreshing but I guess my disastifaction with the decisions made there made my interest in the story start to wane from then on. It was a fun ride.