Reviews for Revelations |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/9 This is so good! I hope there will be more someday, but regardless, this series has been a fantastic read, and this first chapter is so exciting. Thank you for writing! I hope you're doing okay and having a wonderful day. :) |
ProwlSIC chapter 1 . 9/13/2019 Update plz. |
User724 chapter 1 . 3/12/2019 One little cockroach was doing okay Till he was caught by Maddie Fenton one day Try as he might he could not get away (You're gonna catch 'em all except Cockroach Phantom) There were two others with him, but they both died Vaporized by whatever Maddie had tried For the third cockroach everything just changed His tiny bug brain found this all very strange (Phantom, phantom...) When he first woke up up he realized That for some strange reason he didn't die He had neon blue wings, and small glowing eyes But he still only wanted to multiply It was then that he knew what he had to do He had to run before Maddie killed him too He's here to hide from me and you! You're gonna catch 'em all except Cockroach Phantom You're gonna catch 'em all except Cockroach Phantom You're gonna catch 'em all except Cockroach Phantom... |
User724 chapter 1 . 3/12/2019 Gonna catch en all except Cockroach Phantom! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/15/2018 Ahhhhh yes yes yes I love this! I'm so glad you're continuing this series. |
LittleBunnyFufu13 chapter 1 . 11/8/2018 Oh snap tings just got real! 0_0 She better contain that roach so it doesn't cause mass havoc. Better yet, kill it with fire/ |
MidnightWriter44678 chapter 1 . 11/1/2018 Woah! Does she realize what this means? Does she know what she has just found? I don't know why, but the thought of Maddie creating halfas intentionally doesn't sit very well with me, though I really love this installment of the story! I really look forward to reading whatever you post next and I can't wait to see where this amazing story leads! |
Catzooa chapter 1 . 11/1/2018 This was very interesting, looking forwards to what's next! Thanks for the story. |
Night chapter 1 . 11/1/2018 OH NO! A halfa roach is THE WORST possible THING you could have created! It will escape, breed and multiply! Creating a plague of halfa roaches that no pest control or ghost hunter will ever be abel to stop, because the roaches have halfa abilitys! |
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 11/1/2018 So now the cockroach technically speaking revealed Danny's secret to his mother and her whole word got turned upside down... Maddie sure is at a loss for words, oh boy. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |