I love you so much thanks for writing this

So darn funny I IT!

I love your stories so much. You write Anne and Gilbert perfectly. Hope you write another one someday!

This was so great to read it all from Anne's perspective... oh her love for Gilbert is so great and you just write their passion and love so marvelous and with such finesse that one gets drawn into the story... I really want more... but I wish you luck w the RW writing project... but hope you return to FF world again...

I think that if cameras existed back then, I am sure that Anne would have taken a moment to immortalise the moment of her watching and staring at Gilbert standing at the feet of their bed, still wearing that blue suit, by taking a picture of him, I am positive that, many years later, she would still be looking at that picture, remembering that night, just like it happened yesterday !

But, as it is in their time period that this story is happening, she only have her eyes, her memories, her imagination, her dreams, to always remember Gilbert still wearing that blue suit, and slowly turning around, just as she asked him to do, with her telling him of just what she did, right after he had dropped her off at Green Gables after Charlie's wedding...

And, here, tonight, them being married for three weeks already, Anne's dreams and imaginations, and desires and longings, all happened just like she had envisioned them.

Her naked on the bed.

Her touching herself.

Gilbert listening and watching her.

Still and always wearing that blue suit.

Gilbert not being able to control himself longer.

Anne laughing when she realised he was lying besides her on the bed.

Still wearing the blue suit.

Him asking her to still show her how it happened when she was thinking of him.

Ending with, Anne still being naked, Gilbert still wearing the blue suit, with the both of them, together, making love, that way !

That's one way too fulfil completely, entirely, absolutely, magnificently a girl (Anne) dreams !

You must know that I absolutely love it, when writers go back and write once again some part of their stories and rearranged them, rewrite them, retell them with many, many, many, many, many, many more details and more scenes for us, the readers !

And you did just that here with this story !

Thank you !

Enough with the temptations already, give us and Anne a taste of what we are all waiting for, for Gilbert to be touching her, caressing her, feeling her, kissing her, exploring her, making love to her, while wearing that blue suit !

I don't think I was ready for you to jump forward by two years with this chapter and with part two...

But, I have to say that this was a very nice surprise, to be able to read Anne's thought of what happens in this chapter, as we had already read it with Gilbert's point of view in the Honeymoon story...

''I think that this long engagement is going to be the end of me'' Gilbert thinking this tonight after having resolve to not go further with the kisses, was a pure torture...

Well, Anne touching and caressing and feeling and giving herself pleasure, while imagining that it is Gilbert that is doing all of this to her, lying together, in her small bed, in her east gable room, at Green Gables, makes me wonder if you are going to write a similar scene like this with Gilbert, in his bed, at Blythe farm, and, with him imagining that it is Anne that is giving him pleasure ?!

I loved that it was tonight, of all those nights they've been together, that Gilbert called Anne ''Anne-girl'' for the very first time !

Colours green and blue, I think that they will forever be associated with Anne and Gilbert !

Oh my, dear J, I think that this story was just what I needed, not only because of the heath coming from outside, but also, from the heath I could feel coming from the Sloane's room, from Anne's stare at Gilbert with him not knowing, from Gilbert's smile and hazel eyes on Anne...

Happy holidays and have a great new year good luck with everything and if you ever want to come back and give us more of your M rated stories I for one would be happy

Bless your writing, bless this fic, and bless this fandom for providing such delicious gems! I love how you make Anne and Gilbert's relationship intimate in every sense, including talking about touching oneself (and even showing it!). I love the subversion of the fanservice trope: rather than the woman be the object of desire, it's the man, right down to a strip tease! (Though yes, Anne provided plenty of pleasure for Gilbert, naturally...)

I've said it once, twice, and I'll say a thousand more times: your smut is incredible! You successfully weave together sexiness, passion, romance, and even naughtier aspects and still make it utterly sensual. Wonderful job, just like The Honeymoon! *applauds*

I... I think I need a cold shower after reading THAT! Truly, you are a master of writing deliciously excellent smut. *bows*

Ya know... I’ve said from the beginning I’m not an MA reader most of the time. It’s so difficult to do well so that it doesn’t come across as tawdry and I guess kind of gross. But you have the talent to walk that line. I don’t see cheap thrills I see genuine affection between two passionate people who have waited so long to be able to be together in this way. You really show how special that can be. Their level of trust with one another, Anne’s openness, Gilbert’s flirtation, it’s all delicious and this story was very well done. Your details are just perfect enough to bring us to the moments but not so much that they ruin the mystery or romance. That’s not easy to do and I applaud your skill. Bravo on another great job, J! Simply wonderful! Keep me posted on your original! I’ll read anything you write, my dear!