Oh this is so tender and excellent, and just how I imagine Thasmin to be! Top notch!

YES Oh my god i love this so freaking much please never stop writing! :)

Awww, that was sweet.

I wonder how they'd react to them having a relationship like this on the TV series or The Doctor and another female character in a relationship.

This has me grinning from ear to ear. So cute. Love it

Okie dokie I'm back! (I'm AyaJune!)

But unfortunately I couldn't find that part I mentioned. :(

But I did find this: "she listened to her, telling her stories of her adventures, her favourite foods and the people she'd met throughout time and space, and Yaz contently listened to everything she shared." You wrote listened twice in the same sentance, repetition, and maybe it's a not such a big deal but it broke the flow for me. :)

Anyway, I really enjoyed this, like others said: you're characterisation is wonderful!

This is awesome! My first doctor who and thasmin fanfic! Thought at one point you didnt capitalise the doctor's name, I tried to find it but I couldn't as I have limited time. I find it tomorrow though!

I'm so happy somebody is writing this pair. This was a very nice fic.

Please write more.. I'd love to see this relationship take to the bedroom
Awesome story

Good work

This was so lovely it made me smile :)

This was great! The characterisation was spot on, and I loved the ending!