Great story. A new pairing that I have never seen before. Love stories with Parselmagic and Dobby playing a bigger role. Thank you for the share.

I loved this fanfic! Thank you for writing it. I hope you keep writing, and I am currently reading your other fanfiction, The Only One. Thank you!

He should find the Black Grimoire. Hell why hasn't he claimed grimmauld place yet?

He should get books from Grimmauld Place. I'm sure the Blacks had some obscure battle spells.

I lied this story with a rare pairing as well
Thank you for sharing :)

Wonderful story. I hope Mandy's animagus form is one that would compliment Harry's.

Some flaws with your writing style, but the story itself was very good. I’ve never seen someone plan out his powers in that way and it was somehow OP without being ridiculously so, not to mention CONSISTENT. You’re literally the first author I’ve seen make an OP story where he wasn’t made weaker or more stupid just to add suspense to a fight.

The ending was cheesy as all f*ck, but I don’t mind dairy right now so that’s not an issue.

When you make characters recount an event or give some information on something, you don’t have to go into detail. Detail can be good, but you take it to the point of it being excessive exposition, most of which we were already aware of since we read it before. The way you had Mandy explain her issue to Pomfrey was better as it was more of an overview and not her saying it all like she was painting a vivid picture, but still had an unnecessary amount of detail. You could have just said “she explained what happened”.

Some bits of this make for some rough reading... in two paragraphs you managed to say what equates to “Slytherin’s office was at the back of the dungeons while the common room was at the front” four bloody times. One time did the trick, as it’s not exactly a puzzle.

I love this story I wish there was another chapter which was the end like what happens after this and everything

Loved it!

Hey I've been reading some of your stories...every damn one of them is outstanding! You are one hell of a story teller and one hell of a writer too! I love reading a/u harry potter stories got so sick of canon type stories also love it when he's powerful and has or find really cool and/or unique abilities. Just like your stories.
The only thing in this story that seemed a little off was... If a parseltongue stunner was more powerful than a normal stunner it just stands to reason to think it could only be enervated using parseltongue and/or wearing off in an hour or two...

One of the best fics I've come across very original in many aspects and thankfully no 'greater good' Dumbledore. I love the personality you gave to H/M/D/ &W. Thank you for sharing

Is this the same response from Ron or different? Been too long for me to remember.

Well that was certainly a good story