Reviews for A Sweet Treat
WritingFanfictionCallMeThat chapter 1 . 2/17/2019
Ezran's line: "You know I wished you used your mouth to wipe off the ice cream stains off Rayla's lips" made me brust out laughing.
Well done on the fanfiction! ️
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 11/5/2018
Lol and behold what did I see when I clicked on the Dragon Prince category today. I saw nine stories by the same writer within a twenty-four-hour period, yet all but one of these stories is under a thousand words. The writer couldn’t even be bothered to use proper grammar in their summaries, what with every single one missing an end period. (No, this isn’t a stylistic choice, but instead an annoyance.)

I click on the first story and find the actual story contains punctuation issues within the dialogue, yet looking over all the summaries I am left with the impression the writer honestly didn’t spend much time on each story, but I think it should be pointed out to the writer that seeing a category flooded with one writers stories particularly in a small fandom just ends up being super annoying for those looking for stories to read due to the fact in most cases the writers who rapid post seem to care far more about the amount of stories they are getting out over the actual quality of their work.

As for the story – please put more thought into what you write. If coffee isn’t coffee in the series, but instead something that Claudia invented it stands to reason the same thing would go with ice-cream. The writer also forgets the mechanics behind ice-cream and the fact the fandom doesn’t take place in a modern setting, yet they choose to write it in a modern setting without giving any background what-so-ever.