This was okay, but the fight scene felt clumsy. You have some sentences that go on forever and breaks the pacing, and I think there wasn't much sense of danger.

The kiss felt too soon too. I get why you're going for it, buy realistically I think it's too much of "look he was nice to me so now I'm in love", which is ironically a characteristic of the white knight mindset

this was so hot my god ;D

You may have never thought you would write WK, but we White Knight fans appreciate it none the less. You did an excellent job with this, showing how and why Weiss and Jaune could work together both as friends and as romantic partners.

I'm surprised you liked the second episode of volume six especially when it ended on a cliffhanger like that, which I know you hate them doing.

WOOOO!

Okay, this isn’t a ship I’m into but you made it work. I like the banter between the two of them and how Jaune was willing to do anything to protect her. It’s in his character and I’m glad that you got a bit of inspiration back. I was almost convinced that you had lost hope. Then this appeared. So I’m happy and excited for the amazing stories in your head. This was a gem and I’ll be waiting patiently for more. Keep going.

this was alright