have you stopped this story?

Story concept good delivery so so sex bad character Interaction so so

Did you even try proof-reading this shit before posting ? You did finish high school, right ? Or middle school...?

And that lost me. I loathe DEs getting away with their bullshit, and forcing Hermione to be submissive to her torturer is nauseating.

I’m going to take a guess and say that Luna will be the fairy and Fleur (if she’s in this story) will be the veela, but if she isn’t in this story than maybe Cho or Lavender?

Not bad considering the way it was written and why. It also has a lot of potential.

That being said it does have a lot of mistakes, holes and even events that seem to be miss remembered. It also doesn't seem to have an overall direction on where the story is going.

Personally the crack pairing with Sirius and Remus is the part I don't like the most. This pairing doesn't fit neither of their personalities and it seems really forced. If you had put this in the description I wouldn't have even started reading it.

Awesome! I predict that Harry's Veela mate is either Fleur or Gabrielle De Lacour. And until this chapter, I was half-expecting Moaning Myrtle to become his ghost mate! Hmmmmmm...Fairy? Who could conceivably have Fairy blood in Hogwarts? Aha! LUNA LOVEGOOD! Not only oes she totally have that kind of dreamy demeanor, but she's also a Ravenclaw; so not only would Harry's harem encompass 'the Seven' but also all four houses of Hogwarts!

Not virgin? Lost to Dean? What a shit

Great chapter! Will Fleur Delacour be joining the harem?

A good story so far, little cliche here and there but overall I am enjoying it.
Thanks for writing.

Ginny as a phoenix?! Ok! Did NOT see that coming, but cool...er..HOT!

What next? PLEASE let there be a lamia and arachne('Everyday Life with Monster Girls'-style but with the MGE lust)?! I could totally see Tracy Davis turning into a lamia! Wouldn't Malfoy and the rest of the Slytherin-house boys be PISSED?! TWO of the hottest girls in their house being mated to HARRY POTTER of all wizards?! LOL! And maybe the 'giant squid' in the Black Lake is really a kraken(MGE)?

Me thinks a veela may appear

This is great can’t wait for more

Great read keep it coming

I’m expecting Ginny’s “sickness” to also be creature related and will need be a mate. There’s also a few other options for mates I can think of but will just have to wait and see...