Reviews for The Jill Sandwich
Guest chapter 9 . 5/2
good
Guest chapter 9 . 4/1
good
Onkwehonwe Kashatstenhshera chapter 3 . 3/30/2019
Jill is probably gonna have a devils threesome xd

I like that we both have characters call her Jilly Bean.

You make them a cute couple
OBSERVER01 nli chapter 9 . 12/21/2018
Nice chapter. Keep up the good work.
silver scropion chapter 9 . 12/23/2018
Lol I had to read this again I admit I was half asleep the first time. I loved how you build on their attraction and how they'll always find each other. Like we talked about it good ol whiskey dick for the save . Boy luck he didn't drink beer otherwise there'd been no fun .Also Yeah I wouldn't have cared about nor do I care about her being on the pill. I loved that chick to do that 100 times over .
It'll be interesting to see how that mission goes. Boy playing with fire Ada and Jill are some dangerous women to be playing with on little experience but he'll be fine.
Ah I enjoyed shewolf.
wedertz chapter 8 . 12/17/2018
I'm curious, is the bit about "Nothing more American than exploiting the weak for financial gain", is this Ada's and Leon's way of looking at America in your fic?
OBSERVER01 nli chapter 8 . 12/17/2018
Nice chapter. Keep up the good work,
silver scropion chapter 8 . 12/17/2018
Ohh this was so good she wolf. I noticed the changes asap and liked the new additions. I like to be asking questions. That scene in the cave hmm that's nice I was getting ready to write a lemon myself. I like what you did in the cave and after. I noticed Chris consoled her instead of leon. I'm she's working a angle and Chris was more relevant for the scene. It was nice the romance leon and jill had you can already see the bigger changes in them.

Ah Ada showing up was the first thing I asked myself then it happened. I knew she'd show up she always does ..

I love this new case I'm ok before I even finished reading I'm like they're using those people for bows ,the women for breeding or carriers if I'm right. I read the next part and was like I'm close. Also women naturing good laugh maybe some not most from increasing filicide rates Not going to open that can of worms. (Open can because we play with the concept a lot sis)
We men are stronger and only weak men are ruled by the smaller brains... sucks there's so many simps. But I can agree she isn't wrong the bitch . I'm more disgusted what is the ultimate goal for using the women than some half baked experiments . (Wait it works on emotions is this some prototype to the t phobos and or t Miller viruses. ) Thinking a loud. Anyway nice shot at America it's true as American I can see and say she's right but so is Canada and the rest of the western world is crumbling . I'm glad he stiffed her fir jill and that Male vs female stuff she spouting I get it but women can't compete with men if you have to have a handicap to even compete get it. Only a fool underestimates and opponents I'm realist. Men and women need to work together that's only to beat these viruses not playing games oh the irony in that . Sorry sis I'm rambling my brain is going a mile a minute.

Sorry lol about the men vs. women you know how competitive I am.
OBSERVER01 nli chapter 7 . 12/8/2018
Nice chapter. Keep up the good work.
silver scropion chapter 6 . 12/3/2018
I woke up late and this is good stuff here sis. I loved rereading it again. I can see myself in this I can work well with other but I'm a lone wolf. I don't like following women sure as a partner but otherwise no. But we discussed it before and do like me some strong women
Still a little disturbing those poor people sigh .
But like I said great read.
OBSERVER01 nli chapter 6 . 12/3/2018
Nice chapter. Keep up the good work.
OBSERVER01 nli chapter 5 . 11/26/2018
Nice chapter. Keep up the good work.
silver scropion chapter 5 . 11/26/2018
Lol damn sis that was funny as hell. I'll say it again only get better rereading it. I saw it the first time and I see here that foreshadowing and the connections. Also I know it's a thing is like a tic for me magazines (or mags) although they do have speedloading clips for mags
I remember that well also I don't care how useful yoga is that shit is girly. Although I can't talk I'm a natural contortionist still need to limber up. I love how you present the cast I choked laughing and my stomach tightened when the cold water was mentioned. I like playing with fire you know what I'm talking about.

Good stuff as always sis.
rufus264 chapter 4 . 11/26/2018
Fantastic chapter
rufus264 chapter 3 . 11/26/2018
Great chapter.
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