garry stue dumbledorr?lol

Nice chapter.
Stay very selective on harem list. There can be multiple one night stands. Some just to mentally fuck with hero or rival.
Stay safe.

Nice chapter
Though before he leaves the magical world he should fuck all the MILFs

I just found this story and I look forward to seeing how this moves forward.

For ten chapters this story is so far better than the others in this category (harryxmarvel). i hope the author would continue pumping chapters and god speed. ja'ne

Just found this story and it looks amazing. Great potential for world building and story telling.

Excellent chapter I like how you had Harry throw Lucius off balance by letting him know old Moldy is still alive; eagerly awaiting the next chapter

Well, good chapter and fic, waiting for the next one and the manipulations of both Dumbledore and Lucius, I'm surprised Dumbledore did not try to legilimens Harry or try anything

- Turning the Coat
Not quite sure why folks are surprised that Harry would do this.

A) Draco hasn't pissed him off and made himself and his family an enemy of Harry, unlike canon.

B) This Harry has already aligned himself with Selene who has a far bigger body count than the DE do.

C) This Harry is far more pragmatic than his canon counterpart and hates Dumbledore for sticking him with the Dursleys and ensuring he stayed there by blocking legal proceedings against them (IIRC).

As such allying with Malfoy makes perfect sense as they share a common enemy in the Old Wether and Malfoy wants shot of dear old Tommy, whereas Harry is looking to deprive Tommy of any forces if through some miracle he were to regain a body.

Still, do Harry and Morgana keep the family name in mind: Malfoy, bad faith.

Very much a trust, but verify situation and never giving them a big enough hold that they could try and pull off a coupé.

Also raises the question how Harry will eventually handle Sirius.

I can see ways to potentially pull him into Harry's camp, but it'll be tricky maneuvering, like trying to park in a crowded carpark with not a lot of wriggle room.

Remus?
No chance unfortunately. Has drunk too much of the Dumbledore Kool-Aid and too set in his way to not become a supposed monster, that he's thoroughly shackled himself into the prevailing morality even when said morality hates him. An Uncle Tom in other words.

Don't get me wrong, I want to like Remus, but his canon behaviour wouldn't really justify it and I'm not seeing an angle where he'd be willing to follow this Dark Harry, regardless of the arguments given or their veracity.

*shrugs*
Wait and see.

- Truth
Eh, not fully sure on the only using the truth in moderation approach, when more often than not it's far more effective than a lie.

I'd class a misrepresentation as inbetween a lie and truth and it does indeed have its own power.

But even then, shading the truth can also lead to that effect and people jumping to conclusions, without any risk to yourself about being called out on it, unlike the misrepresentation.

After all, the latter is a deliberate act, whereas the former is simply a result of personal bias and we all have those.

*shrugs*

- Oversight
Eh, Rowling introduced a lot of things, than one could leverage into OP, if you have a creative enough mind for it, course she treated them as one shot fire and forgets, rather than the resource they actually represent.

Time Turners, House Elves, Liquid Luck, the list just goes on and on.

Heck, loyalty potions used on select Mundane targets to get Intel of what the local government is up to, delivered/planted by House Elves. To name one example.

Time Turners for alibi's is another.

So don't feel too bad about forgetting about liquid luck, Rowling did worse after all and she created the stuff. ;-P

- Bosses aside
"The girl next door" type is a type for a reason.

As for HP females not measuring up. Three words: Veela and Metamorphmagus.

Set aside the movie portrayals of Fleur and Tonks and think how they're portrayed in the books. And then consider that Tonks is no different from Mystique, one of the Marvel females you're gushing about .

*shakes head*

So your argument doesn't float.

- Otsutsuki Naruto
Suggest you reread the story as it's obvious that you've forgotten a lot of facts about this story and are letting your personal biases further cloud your judgement, thus leading to your rather inaccurate review.

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Corrections:

*... he was more than use to these ploys, ...*

"used".

*... though he did take not how close Harry sat to her.*

"note" rather than "not".

*... said with a beautiful smile on his face ..."

"her" not "his".

*... that caused Lucius to raise on brow in interest. *

"one" or "a" rather than "on".

*... for a wizard which I handily defeated."

"who", rather than "which".

*His mental barriers had clamped down other his mind ..."

"onto" rather than "other".

*... and Lady a Tempest much more closely.*

Nuke "a", not needed.

*... his already good skills that would improve with age would help him get heat he wants.*

"what" rather than "heat".
"wanted" rather than "wants".

*... and the underlying mean of his words ...*

"meaning" would work a tad better than "mean", which isn't wrong perse, but lacks the familiarity and punch the former would bring to the sentence.

*... and Half-bloods in the world would not ...*

"... world it would not ..."

*It's mouth was lined rows of jagged teeth and long sharp claws.*

"its" rather than "It's".
"... and it had long ..."

*... his breath hitch in and his heart freeze ...*

Nuke "in", serves no purpose there.

*... Lucius questioned as the beast came to a stop out of the portal and seemed docile as Harry slowly petted it like one would to a normal house pet.*

Comma after "questioned".

Two options:
"... one would a normal ..."
"... one would do to a ..."

*They are simple in the way they follow the strongest, ...*

"... way that they ..."

*... but if there is enough of them they will decide to overthrow you."*

"... them, then they ..."

*... of taking his eyes off the new docile ...*

"now" rather than "new"?
As the latter doesn't really seem to fit, contextually.

*Morgana remained seated a sense of pride ...*

Comma after "seated".

*Lucius had just left having agreed to join their cause ...*

Comma after "left".

*And then when he would ask for more I then offer the Demons."*

Comma after "more".

*... Harry vowed he would never ensure that he never would again.*

"... would ensure that ..."

Bon chapitre

Will we see Daphne Greengrass?

hope it massive harem since he is a king that going to rule multiple realms. marvel womens are hot they are to many to let go.

hope they find a diiferent use for the stone change there body and increase the potential. They should try get harry to have the x gene

GRINDELWALD! wow, this is the second fic that i have found using that plot twist. this should make for an interesting read.

and as of right now, June 03, 2020, 1:30 PM BC time, this is my first reading of this fic. so grindelwald is a prediction. though a very easy one to make if you are familiar with the lore... or have watched Fantastic Beasts 1 and 2.

dark implies evil. so unless you want him going the way of Voldemort of Grindelwald, i would say he is still grey. just on the darker end of the spectrum. he isnt evil, just more... self absorbed. his focus is on himself and his allies. he is a terror to his enemies, but a light to his allies.

this version of harry sounds more pragmatic then anything else. he will likely have a personal code of ethics he sticks with, but does not abide by the typical laws of man, nor their own morals.

in truth? i would say that this harry is more similar to a Magus from the Nasuverse. they are not necissarily evil, but they also are not moral. they will go to almost any length for the sake of their research, but they do have their own, albeit twisted, set of ethics.

so dark grey, with his own twisted set of morals. that is how i would describe him. most fic's never truly has him go dark. some get close, but for him to go truly dark? he would have to be equal to, or worse, then voldemort and Grindelwald.